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Reviews for At the Edge of Heaven

By : Kabraxal
  • From ANON - Mark on July 02, 2013
    Great story so far! Hope you finih it!
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  • From Deadlocke on July 06, 2012
    This is honestly one of the best ME stories I've read so far. Very deep and I like the swapping around, giving us more and more peaks into Shepard and Miranda's heads. Shepard is tragically human, how he didn't just automatically fall into line after coming back like he did in the game is excellent. Looking forward to more.
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  • From shadowblade65 on February 09, 2012
    excellent story really enjoying how your telling the story from two perspectives very interesting keep up the good work
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  • From thmanwithnoname on January 29, 2012
    Still digging this, I'm glad to see you're still writing. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you handle Jack and Miri's interactions. I tend to enjoy them as friends, antagonists, or even lovers, so I'm curious to see where you take them.

    (Also liking the way you're handling Miri's thoughts, it's interesting to see how differently taken from how she sees the goings-on.)
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  • From BiowareFan on January 06, 2011
    I know you've mentioned before that updates wouldn't be on regular basis (believe me the wait is worth it) but I'm wondering since its been a while since the last update if you plan on continuing this wonderful story?
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  • From Badpie24 on August 08, 2010
    I really love the way you write Miranda. Just when I feel like I'm ready to kind of write her off you publish a new chapter that makes her sympathetic and beautiful. Thanks. :) And I love this story. Even though its ripping my heart out over my girl, Ash it's doing it so well.
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  • From BiowareFan on May 18, 2010
    Hey,
    Just wanted to say I really enjoyed this so far.
    -The Sole Survivor interaction...Oh my god, I wish I could do this in game....why Bioware why?!
    -Following that the Ashley mention by Miranda and how Shepard reacted....great! (though I am kind of sad she is dead in your story)
    As was said before there are not many (if at all) MShep/Miranda stories on this site so this is a plus to see one so far.
    Cant wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2010
    I love flashback chapters! It was a nice little break from Miranda's psyche, and getting to know your Shepard better. Ch 8 was very touching, Kabby :)
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  • From Agravain on May 10, 2010
    Excellently written story, always a plus to see m!shep.

    Good work, i look forward to future chapters.
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  • From Batman1992 on March 29, 2010
    Hey Griffon Sabe I've got a crazy idea for a future chapter. What if Tali actually recognized the symptoms of Shepard's depression on Freedom's Progress and she decided to join him much earlier than expected to keep an eye on him because she's worried about him. And maybe when they're alone Tali could be an amateur counselor who's trying to get him to open up...But I suppose that could work just as well with Kelly Chambers, who happens to be a professional counselor but in the game it seems like Kelly's yeoman job takes precedence over her counselor job.
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  • From SenevadShepard on March 16, 2010
    Hadn't expected that Virmire twist! Nice work with tweaking the shuttle sequence to fit the take on the characters that you're building up.
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  • From SenevadShepard on March 05, 2010
    Thank you much for starting and sharing your fic. I've been hoping for someone to write a male Shepard and address what could be going on in his head during his death and resurrection. Enjoying your writing style in this and definitely looking forward to reading where you plan to take the story and how you will write Shepard/Ashley with regard to ME2 events like Horizon.
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