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Reviews for The Face of Desire

By : CobraStrife
  • From Yumberduddle on March 07, 2010
    nice start, very sexy and i cant wait 2 see more! but i really, really reallky really hope this stays f/f...
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  • From NekoFallenOne on March 07, 2010
    Great work!
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  • From Platinumsabr on March 06, 2010
    Finally, someone writes what clearly needed to be written. I've never used the Blood Magic ritual myself--even though I agree that Isolde dearly deserves it from the moment you meet her--but I have experimented with the options offered by Desire. For such a tension-laden situation, more suited to a male character admittedly, the fact that the pleasure choice goes so totally unappreciated in a game where scenes of intimacy literally lead to trophies being awarded (LOL) is far worse than disappointing. Even Alistair gets a little scene with Morrigan if you can convince him--not hard mind you--and he's not even the main character!

    Regardless, very well done scene. Your writing was devoid of both grammatical and spelling errors, and I can't tell you how thankful I am for that. Add to that the depth you were able to add to a character at the mercies of any player's individual opinions, and I have to say you're a refreshing taste of talent in the global mishmash of elementary writing so many submit to fanfiction. I particularly enjoyed the allusions you made throughout the ordeal of her mindset degrading, such is the way that Desire Demons claimed their captives. There was no force, only the temptation to receive what was so badly wanted, and in that the character begins to fall prey to the machinations by believing it is their own will wishing, for it truly is. The end of that road is what every victim of Desire fails to see at the time.

    I think you did an excellent job of everything, but I do want to see where you go from here, and I sincerely hope you continue. As a mage the character has greater focus and will, especially in the fade. They don't lose themselves, and try consciously not to. Will the desires formed during an honest choice bring an honest love to one known as a darker spirit, or will a tainted lust fueled by malicious reasoning form a dark quest of amorality in the search for nothing but further satisfaction? Personally I'm hoping for the former, but judging on the choices you've made mention of I would guess you would lean more to the latter if you did decide to continue.

    Of course, no matter what you choose, I'll still read it. A demon you've exposed, and a desire you've ignited. Good work.

    Sabr.
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