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Reviews for Ordo Xenos Report-Tau, Subject "Damiris"

By : johnjohn19
  • From ANON - Mors Mortis on May 11, 2010
    a very interesting and intrigueing read, are there any chances of a follow up or perhaps a imilar story on lets say an eldar farseer or a kroot or ogryn
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  • From ANON - Chris Redfield "General Chaos" on May 06, 2010
    I like the direction this story has gone and would like to see a continuation. I have a plot for a similar story that I would like to see. An imperial guardsman (the main character), while not as gun-ho as the rest of his fellow troops, is loyal to the emperor and to mankind and a professional on the battlefield as he was recently or will be promoted to kasrkin trooper status. He gets seperated from his team and encounters a female firewarrior honor guard (tau equilivant to a kasrkin) she saves his life from a suprise attack and for some reason he cannot explain (perhaps a vision/message from the devine emperor himself) he follows and assists the female tau in meeting up with her people. They are on a mission of mercy but a demon of the warp is manipulating the tau and only the female seems to be suspicious. After a betrayal and an escape the etherial is killed by the demon and the link the tau have with him is lost. Dioriented and confused the kasrkin helps her regain her focus and by doing so, accidentally forms a similar bond with her, only this one goes much deeper eventually. They team up to unite the imperial and tau forces and expose the demon who is the leader of the chaos forces that the guardsmen have been fighting against for some time now. They go on many adventuers together and eventually pick up a female eldar guardian trooper. She too develops a bond with the kasrkin (or falls into the same one that the two share) and when the bonds develope far enough, their feelings for each other are unleased not only allowing the kasrkin guardsman to get both females for himself, but as a team they are nearly unmatched. Given the xenophobia of the imperium, it seems unlikely that their relationship will be allowed but a savior appears in the form of captain Gabrial Angelos of the Blood Ravens 3rd Company. Being more open minded then most given his past dealings with farseer macha, he brings the three into the protection and service of the Blood Ravens (who have recently been branded as traitors by their chapter master(this takes place after Dawn of War 2 chaos rising good ending)) While they work with and for the loyal blood ravens the kasrkin is not inducted into the space marines as he is already where he is deemed he should be: as a normal human fighting beside his two lovers supported by the loyal space marines. This should be given an adult rating and can go on for as long as you want, the wh40k universe is a sandbox for such stories after all but this is the basic plot that I would like to see. If you feel that your not up to the job or just don't want to do it, please pass this on to someone who would. Thank you. (this plot is derived from a similar story that is being made on the deviantart site called "The emperor's will be done?" except taken a step further.)
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  • From toonmissy on March 31, 2010
    This was really well done! I'd love to see other Ordo Xenos reports for some of the other races like Eldar or even Demonettes of Slaanesh. But this one was extremely well done.
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