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Reviews for Be alive with me tonight…

By : Dvorchak
  • From ANON - Shale on April 07, 2010
    An overall good story, but it was that last paragraph that just propelled it into the stratosphere.

    Beautiful
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  • From ANON - Draygon on March 26, 2010
    I like the intimacy of the story. However, I have a few nitpicks.

    First, Drell are born able to eat whole foods right away, therefore there would be no need for the women to have breasts.

    Second, her name should not be described as a combination of Japanese and American. We do not have American names. Our names if European have either Hebrew, Germanic, Nordic or Gaelic origins. Her name, therefore would have to be a combination of one of those four if the name that is combined with Japanese is common in America.

    These are small nitpicks however I needed to let you know so that you could get even better and curl our toes with more Thane/Shepard.
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  • From ANON - simplychaos on March 24, 2010
    Wow... that was beautiful just beautiful. You have done an amazing job capturing the moment! I’m shocked. You should consider making this into a multi chapter fic, you know for all the thane fans out there hehe
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