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From ANON - JS on June 23, 2014
Loved this, brilliantly woven into and around the game story I love so much. The Revan/Malak romance aspect is a fascinating story that works so beautifully in adding to the reason behind his hatred of her. I also found Carth to be my first ever game crush, which hasn't faded in the ten years since I first played it.

I really hope this story has an ending in the nearish future, I would love to read it.
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From sandyl666 on September 09, 2011
Okay, I made an account just so I can add to the reviews of this story (Because you really don't get enough, considering the amazing-ness of this story)

So, yeah. Just wanted to say your story is amazing, and I can't get it out of my head. I can't wait to see where you're going to take it and how it's going to develop :)

Your writing style is neat(always a pleasure to see)and your storyline is riveting. I can literally say I didn't find a single moment of it boring. And I love your Revan character. Please do keep it up!
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From Nightodie on March 07, 2011
Chapter 27
I am in denial, too.
Okay, this one was really hard to read. There were emotions tapped. They weren�t soft fuzzy ones. If you�re going to play with my emotions this way, we need more sex scenes.
Even though the end was a bit happier, it was still hard.

Chapter 28
Did he truly not know how she felt about him back then?
I liked the petty little �tweak the nose at� theft and her blaat.
And now I am confused again. Malak.

It�s a shame no one ever listens. Why don�t they listen to reason?

You would think Bastila was smarter. It was too easy. It makes no sense to me.

Chapter 29
Okay, I am lost again. I have no idea who they are talking about.
Yeah, that is a really stupid reason to kill someone.
I told you I didn�t like her. She is very shallow, hiding behind honor. Stupid cow.
Okay, I don�t understand vanity, sorry.
Is the future enough? I know you, and I know it�s not.

Chapter 30
Was Revan really that stupid? Even after it was pointed out to her way back in chapter� I can�t remember?

I knew I shouldn�t like Bastila.

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From Nightodie on March 06, 2011
Chapter 25
So somehow, off camera, they found the father?
Wait, it�s looking for Revan again right?
That second in command was a little too easy to beat.
What? Kissing??? I think we need a new description. I want to talk to you about that.

Yay, party� oh wait, old enemies first. Oh cool, a duel! I am going to need a Star Wars dictionary. I am not sure I am getting the meanings of some of these words.

Who�s Karath? Oh, nevermind. Of course he is going to do something stupid, don�t we all?

Chapter 26
�Upper class and disdainful� Okay I love that *puts in steal for later file*
�You must destroy what you love� Yeah, that one, not so much.
Okay, that is just mean. I don�t believe him.
Famous last words, �never� isn�t as long as you think� (especially with you writing it).
�Long-winded display of incompetence� Okay, that�s just good!!!
How did they learn so much about her?
�Why couldn�t peace coexist with passion?� I like that�it can� as long as humans aren�t involved?
I love the jerking off line.
�Blast everything that moves� :D
I found the Malak dialog a bit confusing. Is some of it supposed to be italics?
Sacrifice? But was it, truly?

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From Nightodie on February 25, 2011
Chapter 22
I liked the interaction between Mission and Carth.

I still don�t like Bastila � she can cry all she wants � If that�s a friend who needs�
He is too nice to her.

Paragons can kick ass, too.

Jealousy is sweet.

Making the evil good, that�s very sneaky. Is that how you do it? In knowing, will I be able to shield myself from you will. I know the answer, do you?

Sticky is fun!!

It is quite possible that I have a sick feeling in my heart also.

Chapter 23
Wynn knows the truth? *confused frown*
Why did Wynn attack?
Wait, why are the Sith students attacking? Oh � nevermind.

Oh, how sweet.

Okay, next chapter� Back up time Damn it!!!! No I don�t want to play Pacman.

Chapter 24 (finally)
Now I remember why I have never been drunk.
I know farmers. It isn�t as sexy as you think it is. The loving family sounds nice though. For the record, hay is sticky (it pokes you and leaves splinters). Oh wait, you didn�t mean that literally, did you?

Sometimes I am too literal when I read this.

They really like starting trouble, just to start trouble� sounds familiar. Chaos = Growth.
Order = Stagnation. Interesting.

I want a cave.

Okay, I think I missed something. I so have to play this game, don�t I?

Wookiees live in trees? I didn�t know that. Is Chuundar a dictator or something? Wait, why alone? So not alone, Jedi only.

I don�t get why they�re running, but no one else is afraid.

Why didn�t Patience get to decide who went?

Star maps, and a new Jedi.
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From Nightodie on February 18, 2011
Chapter 19
A mysterious spirit, maybe an answer, but more questions. The love of flowers, so sweet. Is there more to it than that? I think there might be. That place is evil.
Saving another? That�s nice. Death doesn�t matter?
A fight, against unbelievable odds. I like that.

Chapter 20
Talked out of it, really quickly. That was almost too easy.
What about the sword? What about the Jedi guard? Why?
Evil cookie recipes. Really? I think someone needs to make you evil cookies.
Questionably evil dessert. I see a pattern here.

Chapter 21
FINALLY!!!!! Boy, that was some wait. So, your telling me that they way to avoid evil is to let others suffer. You know I don�t see that.
What? Hiding? I so did not see that. This is taking duel personalities a bit far. Or is it�

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From Nightodie on February 17, 2011
Chapter 16
I like lizards, they eat flies. I don't like flies.
Dark Jedi - Dark side *sighs*
The jealousy was cute. Was there sex? Did I miss it?

Chapter 17
I like Jawas.
"Fighting the 'good' fight" SEE!!!!
Ah, a 'lost' found in the hands of the enemy? Nasty surprise.
Kiss - cut - Frustration!!!
More kissing, more cutting, more frustration!!!!

Chapter 18
A portent for things to come?
The dark is encroaching. And she was so mean. I never played, but I see what happened. What she did to him, it was cruel. I, of course, would shed tears. Many tears for the loss.

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From Nightodie on February 15, 2011
Chapter 14
Okay, now I want chocolate. Neat game. Dancing lessons, that is very apropos at this moment. Oh, no fair, I totally thought I was getting, well, you know.
*waiting impatiently for the thaw*

Chapter 15
Another battle� I�m going to have to play this game, aren�t I?
An interesting battle, her strength being her speed and attention to detail. The kissing was nice. Not sure what to make of the bonding thing yet. I like both droids.

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From Nightodie on February 15, 2011
Chapter 12
Support, argument, chosen without choices, Stupidity and a kiss.
The force has will? It�s an entity? Does it dress well? What�s wrong with stupidity? Are you going to answer these and other question in the next installment? Same Bat time� okay I�ll stop now.

I don�t understand the Mission/brother thing.

Ugh � you�re going to dark side her aren�t you? (Okay maybe I suspected that much already, but still. You do know that keeping to the light side is the real challenge).

Chapter 13
Bastila needs to mind her own business. I officially don�t like her -.-
This looks like a railroad to me! Why submit? Where is the rulebook? Can I read it? I think I need to. Why are personal feelings allowed to be questioned? Why would she answer? Well I am behind how that section ended.

Building things, questions again and a rescue. That was interesting.

Oh wait, I�m supposed to review the writing , right? Uh� good penmanship, fine grammar. *ducks*

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From Nightodie on January 14, 2011
Chapter 11

A race, and an escape, exciting. I needed popcorn. Had pistachios instead.
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From Nightodie on January 14, 2011
Chapter ten.

Suprised change. The love lost, gone. The missed secret, lost. A new meeting. Knowledge lost? I wonder.
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From Nightodie on January 12, 2011
Love lost still. Sadness prevails. A truth revealed, and ignored.
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From Nightodie on January 11, 2011
I think I was tortured more.
The loss of love.
I cry for it.
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From Nightodie on January 11, 2011
Chapter Seven.
Lies. The one thing that has the power to destroy all.
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From Nightodie on January 11, 2011
Chapter Six.

Lessons are hard learned. There is darkness here. I felt the touch of the darkness. It was chased by the light.
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