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Reviews for Sins of the Father, Sins of the Flesh

By : cherryblossomveil
  • From RaiN0263 on May 03, 2013
    I find myself kind of pissed off that you never finished this story. Hopefully one day you'll come back to it. I really want to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Rei on May 31, 2012
    I absolutely adore this story and that's quite a cliffhanger. I couldn't help but also notice that it's been quite a while since the last udpate. I'm really hoping that you will maybe update this again one day!
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  • From ANON - Kay on April 25, 2012
    For the love of god, please finish this story. Please. I so desperately need an end to such a perfect story. It's in character, it's interesting, the plot is fascinating, it almost feels like something from the game (apart from the sex, of course, not that I'm complaining). It's always painful to see a story never get its resolution, and I know it's been two years, but please. This story is amazing. Please keep going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2012
    Found this through the Mass Effect Kink Meme, tracked it here and... am rather sad to see that it was never completed. It was very promising, and the combination of Dr Heart and Mr Lawson was brilliant and it saddens me that it was never used in game.
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  • From ANON - blargh on August 07, 2010
    Aggh! please continue. i love this. one of the few stories i actually follow.
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  • From semprevostro on June 23, 2010
    This is absolutely amazing.
    I really liked how you described the bad place :)
    Very dark there.
    I wasn't too interested in the Jacob/Miranda chapter, but it wasn't because your writing
    (just my personal preferences, ok? ^^).
    I really hope you continue writing! o v o



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  • From ANON - Varyalanis on June 16, 2010
    I absolutely adore the way you have given all the different characters and points of view such a distinctive voice. The atmosphere you create, one of mystery, suspense and drama is so dense that it almost drowns the reader. I was completely sucked into the story. I read all 15 chapters in one go and I can't get enough. I have to resort to rereading everything in order to get my fix.

    Definitely one of the most spell-binding Mass Effect fanfics I have ever read. I can't wait to see more of your story!

    -Varyalanis.
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