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By : sillyneko345
  • From GMB on August 25, 2010
    Been enjoying all of your fanfics. Love your writing. Enjoyed this story. Thought the final author thought was cute. *wink* Does this mean "Sparkle & Shine" will be posted soon?
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on July 17, 2010
    lol Can't say I was expecting the addition to Daxter's anatomy. XD Still, it's hot. X3

    I can't wait for Version 2, though. But I will, because your writing is just that high-quality. ^w^
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  • From TaintedEmerald on July 17, 2010
    Well...this was interesting. I was wondering why this story had a "herm" tag.


    Anyways, well done. This was the first lemon I've ever read that had a character with that sort of anatomy, but it worked nicely in your story. I'm glad you decided to go with both options instead of just the more traditional route. Also, I'm surprised Tess hasn't already burst into their room given how much sound Dax was making; and he's still ready and willing.


    Really looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jesa on July 16, 2010
    Once again, your perverted little soul has made my perverted little day. Never stop being awesome.
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  • From ANON - Reva on July 16, 2010
    Did you know this just made my day? I had a very hard one with alot of work and when i looked up on this site for any new stuff - of course i wasn't expecting some-, you had uploaded a new chapter! Yay!

    After i started reading, it was like "Whew, really wasn't expecting _this_..." Not that i'm against herms, but i thought a herm dax might be weird...but it wasn't :D

    It was totally awesome! The way you write your storys is really entertaining and its always nice to read! Oh, and i guess i dont have to mention how suggestive it was ;D ( If thats the wrong word..well i guess you know what i want to say.)
    But ooow i could hit you with a pillow! You and your damn cliff hangers! I want to know how it continues! Please write the other chapter fast!

    (Maybe - is it me or have i seen a few writing errors in this one? Sometimes you forgot letters, maybe you should look it up again.)

    Greetings from someone who really loves your stories.
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  • From Amaronith on July 16, 2010
    Oh. My. Goodness. This was so hot. I am SO GLAD I got you to write it you have NO IDEA. XD!! I can't wait to find out what happens, because on the one hand, uh Jak is kind of big for little Daxter to handle. On the other hand? HOT.

    *Is totally feeding the plottsels*
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  • From ANON - Mysterious Angel-05 on July 14, 2010
    Love this story. Please contact me when you update. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Jesa on July 12, 2010
    Bless your perverted little soul. I love your smut so much, even the "weird" stuff.

    ...who am I kidding. Especially the weird stuff. I'm a bad, bad person. Which is why I vote for option one, and hope you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - Connor on July 08, 2010
    Hi Robin. I cannot describe how much this made me blush, squeal and yearn for more. Absolutely fabulous wordplay and emotional impact and descriptive mastery =] I honestly cannot wait for you to continue. And I also sugest option 1, if not only because you want to write that, and will thusly write a better piece, but also because it'd be nice to see somethign original and imaginitive amoungst the sheer awesome of the piece.


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  • From TwistedMemories on July 02, 2010
    Please write more... Please?
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  • From Amaronith on July 02, 2010
    I would love to see both versions you have in mind. Yay for more sexy ottsel fic!I totally don't mind flooding the internet with this stuff *grin* In fact, I just posted my own, so, yeah.

    I'm really enjoying this fic so far!
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  • From ANON - Branny on June 30, 2010
    Robin, I want you to finish this! lol
    I love this story, surprised I didn't see it before!
    Go with the first choice..this stuff is rather good, I knew you enjoyed writing it.
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  • From Skunktail on June 29, 2010
    normally extra work is bad, but in this case i must admit i am curious to see how both versions will turn out :3
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  • From ANON - Reva on June 28, 2010
    Wohoo!
    After watching AF for a few months with nothing new, you came up with this! And since Chapter one i looked every evening if you continued it...and finally! Oh i cant wait to see the other Chapter(s).

    It was really interesting to read, somehow..i could imagine those two doing something like that, even if it seems strange, it fits the characters.
    Its also as well writing as any story you did, no matter how "weird" the content seemed to be, you brought it well to the reader!

    I would like to see version one as well, but if we could get two versions...why not? >x3
    (And again, English isnt my native language...forgive me if it sounds strange!)

    Greetings:
    One of your Fans/Readers

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  • From TaintedEmerald on June 28, 2010
    Look like Dax really has it in for Jak this time. I wonder just how much stamina the ottsel boy has?

    Great chapter (especially considering how fast you wrote it). I was impressed with your ability to add backstory and keep the two in character in the middle of a lemon without detracting from the action at all (seriously, people should learn from you). This could be the start of a new series for you, if you've got room on your already full platter.



    Anyways, I'm gonna second both options. If you really have to choose though, go with the first. No reason to limit your creativity after all, and I love how you manage to keep your stories fresh despite having written so much already.



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