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Reviews for Reverse-Cowgirl Diplomacy

By : ReverseCowgirl
  • From ANON - Chimera on May 20, 2014
    For fuck's sake, you realise this angst is completely killing any desire to enjoy this fiction? Jesus I can't stand Elissa, I'm too disgusted by her mentality to actually enjoy the well written lemons, where the fuck do you get the idea that any kinda guy would actually touch a woman like that for anything more than a good rut? Just lost all respect for Teagan for not sending that whore away to the kennels where she fucking belongs. How can people praise this fic? The lemons are alright but they're completely overshadowed by Ellisa's angst, no-one wants to know why a woman can rationalize fucking a tavern and then a mabari, I've only skimmed the story but I wouldn't be surprised if she gets gangraped by darkspawn later and enjoys it. Sorry for the rant but I'm actually feeling nauseous, and with the shit I've seen that's impressive.
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  • From ANON - Sins of Pride on March 29, 2014
    This is fantastic. By professional fiction standards (adult or otherwise), it's actually quite good (if perhaps a bit over-sexed). By fanfiction standards, this is outstanding. Far from PWP or parroting lines and events from Dragon Age verbatim, a certain twist was established- the methods and skills used by the Cousland family. Elissa Cousland bears all of the skills of that family, but maintains a pride and stubbornness that might be well suited to nobility. The personalities of the other characters are maintained as previously established by Dragon Age, which causes no small amount of tension and conflict between Elissa Cousland and Alistair.

    The bit that truly astounds me is the 'round' character development used (Elissa and Alistair the most obvious examples). The perspectives of the characters change as the story progresses- which proves an outstanding response to Wordsmith's complaints. RCD has done an excellent job of reconciling Alistair's personality as an opinionated, yet sheltered, puppy with the gimmick of the plotline. Add to this the fact that the story is well written, has good usage of exposition without resorting to walls of text, and is well crafted with creative scenes and circumstances?

    Well. I think that's enough.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2013
    I love this! I can't say how much, but I do! And I am loving this version of Elissa and the Couslands.
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  • From bloodravyn on February 24, 2011
    loved this, from start to finish!
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  • From ANON - Lyndraco on September 15, 2010
    I have to say that I really admire what you've done with your story. It is well written and addicting, and deals with some perhaps less tasteful topics tastefully. I think you've handled the characters well, though I agree that Morrigan was left out a bit, but hey, I don't like her either. :-) It just seemed to get better and better as it went on (in my opinion). Please write more :-)
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  • From ANON - mizuru007 on August 26, 2010
    I'm unlurking just to say I love you. Hard.
    And check on the story everyday when I wake up. Love it to be the very first thing I read in the morning, lol.
    SO UM. YES.
    Back to the shadows with me~
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  • From roxfox62 on August 24, 2010
    You wrote this in a way that was erotic without being offensive. Nicely done.
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  • From on August 03, 2010
    If I may offer some constructive criticism and maybe a few ideas. First off, I've never really read anything quite like this before. It's weird that I can have so many conflicting emotions for it because I both hate it and dislike it.

    First off, you've made Alistair stick to the kind of person he is in the game quite well, however for the purposes of this story I think he needs a little personality change in the near future. He has feelings for a woman who he knows can never actually be "his" and all he does is mope around while it's happening. That makes him very unlikable and more then a few times I've wanted to punch your rendition of Alistair in the face. You really need to pair him up with somebody, and soon, otherwise the relationship you're aiming for will feel cheap when it happens.

    To do something about this problem, pair him up with someone, preferably one of the women in the group. The most likely candidate is Leliana and it could make things very interesting if it seems like Alistair is developing real feelings for another woman. The Elissa you've created is a very physical woman who suppresses her emotions a lot. The fact that she is actually falling in love with someone who won't sleep with her due to her nature will contribute to the fun of having Alistair with another woman whom he has growing feelings for. He's hurting because she is physical with everyone. I'd like to see her face similar pain when he's emotionally attached to someone other than her. Agains, this is only a suggestion, but I do hope you let Alistair a reprieve from seeing the woman he wants sleep with other men all the time.

    Finally getting to my second point, I would like to suggest that Elissa come to an understanding of her own. You make her so unreasonable that if I was Alistair I would have stopped speaking to her a long time ago. She absolutely cannot do what she does AND get the respect and love of a man who is the kind of guy who deserves a woman who will want only him. This is part of the reason I suggested you pair Alistair up with someone like Leliana, who is really nice and sweet and would have no problem dedicating herself to one person. All of the hurt is being put on Alistair. You make Elissa bang a room full of guys one minute and then have her pining for the knight in shining armor the next. Her mood swings are getting extremely old after 21 chapters.

    The absolute biggest request that I have is that you get Alistair some good action before he has any action with Elissa. I think having more experience with sex would help him better understand how Elissa keep her body and her heat separate.

    Anyway, I apologize for the long review, but with Alistair being such a wimp and Elissa being so unreasonable I just couldn't remaind quiet about it any longer. I hope you continue adding new chapters. :)
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  • From ANON - DC on August 02, 2010
    sexy /and/ well written! I can't heap enough praise on this story so far.

    My only point of constructive criticism is some characters that don't fit into the narrative seem more or less ignored. I get that not everyone likes Morrigan, especially paired with a female protagonist, but her absence at the hot springs or as competition for zevran's affections seem out of place - she is a sexual force, after all.

    keep up the great work, looking forward to future chapters.
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  • From on July 14, 2010
    Woohoo! Glad tosee you here! Love the series and can't wait to see where this will go...
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  • From Fluidfyre on July 12, 2010
    I am so glad to see this come over the adult fan fic! The more people who see the glory of RCD the better, your writing deserves the fans and the praise.
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