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Reviews for Four Gourds Adventure [Ocarina]

By : aladdinabu
  • From ANON - icestar on January 20, 2014
    I have to admit this is good. Most erotic stories are a wam bam thank you mam and you move on. Even after the act I was drawn to keep reading there this hint of humor and deep story it's not often I enjoy reading erotic stories for more then a quick thrill you are indeed quite a good author
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2013
    Where is my harem ending?
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  • From ANON - Jimbo on January 01, 2013
    AWESOME story! I'd love to read more chapters perhaps exploring Saria's and Links exploits with other "chippies" lol.
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  • From KMAC on June 05, 2012
    amazing story. i couldve done without all the stuttering but you did well painting the imagery and letting the angst and childhood naivete shine through. and the alternate endings, very cool and unusual. loved every minute.
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  • From avatoa on January 08, 2011
    I kind of hoped Link would have chosen all four of them, you know?
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  • From ANON - Un Gato on November 30, 2010
    Well written with distinct, interesting characters. And there's no question that it's hot. Nonetheless, a few parts bothered me. Saria losing control was just weird. Wanting it desperately and throwing good sense to the wind, sure, but the way you wrote it she seemed genuinely unable to stop.

    And it was actually rather disturbing how these kids (Link is either 10 or twelve, depending on which official guide you trust) show so much self-loathing in each chapter. They're all at a reasonable age to be exploring their sexuality, and I would expect that in a relatively medieval setting girls would learn about sex at a somewhat younger age considering that historically the marriageable age has been much younger than it is today. But they all seem gripped by...moral self-hatred, I suppose, when it doesn't seem likely that any of them would understand their sexuality to an extent to actually be so depressed by it. Link in particular clearly knows nothing about any of this in the first chapter, making it inconsistent when he later seems to have suspected that multiple relationships was a bad idea. All he should know is that his friends are yelling at him. He might decide that it's a bad idea from that, but he wouldn't know before then. As for the rest, though they might be uneasy, or might have been told in the past that this sort of thing is wrong, it's not guaranteed, and they certainly wouldn't at that age really understand what they were told. Today, puritanical though we are, kids their age will do sexual things together as they more or less figure things out. I sincerely doubt that they are crying about their sinful nature as they do so.

    A harem chapter would actually be an excellent addition if you ever decide to write more. Multiple wives was acceptable, even normal, throughout much of history, and in fact still is in many parts of the world. Moreover, it makes sense that Link would, distraught as he is, find it reasonable. He doesn't want to hurt any of them, and he has by the point he decides at least some idea that by choosing one he'll be turning away the rest, and that any of them will be hurt by that. I know it's "traditional" for male heroes to lack tear ducts, but really him breaking down and crying, still confused about why they are all fighting, would be an entirely reasonable response. And as angry as everyone is, surely they'd have some idea at that point that they are hurting him too.

    In the end definitely one of the best stories on the site. It could just be even better.
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  • From ANON - SailorNemesis on July 28, 2010
    Well, all in all really good. I loved the Ruto scenes the best but lots of hotness and good characterizations all around. I was hoping that the official ending would be the full harem, but the last alternate will have to suffice. Hope your next story is as good.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From sillyneko345 on July 24, 2010
    I really like the alternate ending approach here :) It makes sense to see why Link would choose each of the girls, there are good reasons in favor of each one. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - un named on July 22, 2010
    Nice Story. For one of the ending I hope there is a harem ending.
    the off girls can be Zelda's hand maids or Lady in waiting or something
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  • From ANON - George on July 20, 2010
    This is the BEST fic I have ever read, I never knew Saria x Malon would make a good pairing.
    I can't wait for your Malon alternate ending as she is my preferred loz characterby far.
    This kept me up many nights :P there should be a warning on it for how great it is.
    Hope you write more! Exellent fic :)

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  • From ninesenshi on July 17, 2010
    Your writing is impressive. This is one of the hottest stories I have read (especially chap 3 with Ruto). Love her licking out Link. Good portrayal of sex with a non-human species. You're very good at writing conversations, which is often lacking in stories here. You also have a good grasp of the characters. If Nintend0 included sex scenes in their games they would probably be like this (although less kinky). I like the whole `abuse me' attitude of the girls and Link works it without being mean. I'd love to read more of Ruto's murderous threats to Link while he's doing her. Hope to see lots more of this and that Link ends up with a happy harem in the end.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From msjd2020 on July 17, 2010
    I really like the link/ruto chapter, it might be my favorite pairing if only because few people write it. You're the only writer i've seen who has written a sex scene between them, while they have different physiologies. I think that actually makes it more romantic that they had overcome that obstacle. I like your story, keep it up.
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