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Reviews for PLAYTHING

By : mihoyonagi
  • From azuremagician on March 19, 2020

    I come back to this fic every few years. First-person is tricky to write well, but you nailed Zoey's voice and characterization. The progression of her relationship with Tristian feels natural, and I was rooting for them. The cliffhanger ending gives the reader hope, but boy is it evil! (In a good way.)

    I adore this story, definitely my favorite fic. <3


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  • From Dakota_Fox on November 03, 2019

    Came for mindless smut, got an excellently written emotional journey. I thoroughly enjoyed every minute reading this story. I know that by now there isn't really any chance that you'd continue it, but I wish you would... so I can be 100% positive it was Tristan she heard. But... even knowing it was him wouldn't be enough, they gotta find a way to be together forever ;_;


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  • From ANON - Anon on February 21, 2016
    This story is amazing loved it. I really want to know if that was Tristan at the bedroom door.
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  • From ANON - FireFeline on September 05, 2014
    I gotta say, this is one of my favorite Fanfictions, Ero or otherwise. But I wept like a baby at the end (╥_╥) Thanks for the feels, and I hope to see more from you.
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  • From WithinReason on September 12, 2013
    Why must you end this story?! It would be wonderful if you made another sequel to this. I remember reading this fiction a while ago, I believe the movie "Warm Bodies" ripped you off big time! Please make a sequel! I feel like this fiction is incomplete because I have so many questions. Great story, though! Very original.
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  • From ANON - Julia White on March 15, 2013
    Hey! That was a great story! Had me at the edge of my seat the whole time! I love how you took these people and made them real. A nameless hunter into a man named Tristan. It was really awesome and I like how at the end she went back :DDD I wish there was more though :(
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  • From ANON - Haiku on November 23, 2012
    I didn't think this fic would have so much emotion to it either. I just entered this with really smutty assumptions. But it was actually really good. Great writing and I loved the whole story. It was deep and emotional and all that stuff I never expected out of a L4D fic. Once again, kudos for the great job!
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  • From endlessClockwork on July 15, 2012
    In all honesty, I had began reading your story with solely naughty thoughts, completely unaware of the feels I was going to have. The emotion I felt reading this piece of literature generally surprised me. PLAYTHING was a beautiful story, and I hope to see more from you in the future. A new and hopeful for more fan, endlessClockwork.
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  • From ItsMyWorld66 on June 09, 2012
    This was awesome! I started crying at the end and I really hope you will do a sequel~!
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  • From JessiCosmic on April 21, 2012
    This story was simply amazing. I came on AFF today not thinking I'd find anything that would capture me and force me to read to the end like this story did to me. It was very well played out and I loved every bit of it. The ending was phenomenal and I could only wish for a sequel but know that there most likely wont be one. This is one of my favorite fan fictions of all time and I recommend you write more for I'd love to read anything by you.
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  • From Akari-Seikatsu on December 10, 2011
    Your story made me cry. I've only ever come across two or three fanfictions that managed to make me cry. I really think you should write a sequal to this story.
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  • From bloodravyn on February 14, 2011
    more?
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  • From LoneHowler on December 28, 2010
    Wow, I loved this story. You left me wishing there was more to it, I dislike a hanging ending but still I loved it
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  • From Jezmira182 on November 16, 2010
    I absolutly love this!!! you must continue it! I fell in love with both zoey and tristan
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  • From Marsproject on November 09, 2010
    Wow. Just wow. Your story is one of a few that has actually brought me to tears toward the end, the setup was brilliant and the execution was flawless, and the result was me whimpering and sobbing for a few minutes. You got us thinking 'Alright! They're in love! Nothing can go wrong for them!' Then BAM! Reality in all its cruelness hits us like a freight train, just fucking brilliantly done. That end was just cruel though, leaving us hanging on the edge of our seats wondering by some miracle if its really him, or just a worried co-worker. Just god damn you in your genius and heart wrenching cruelty.
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