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Reviews for Paying the Price

By : Rraazz12
  • From Animedevildog on October 06, 2010

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain the required elements. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specific fandom (not just the characters)(in this case, you have added a character disclaim, which is an invalid form of disclaim) and state in some fashion clearly that you make no money/profit.


    You must disclaim the actual fandom by NAME, not the owner/s of the fandom

    .

    Failure to correct the disclaimer will cause your story to be hidden from public view after a week or so of the warning being given, but not deleted; you can still correct your disclaimer, which will then be unhidden again as soon as possible. Continued failure to correct the disclaimer will cause the hidden story to be deleted in time (generally 30 days after it has been hidden). Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately, no warning given.


    Below is a link to the Terms of Service in its entirety

    http://www.adultfanfiction.net/tos.php


    In addition, the next link listed is to the FAQ regarding disclaimers.

    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3560

    Please also take a few minutes to read the content guidelines.

    http://www.adultfanfiction.net/guidelines.php

    Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.



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  • From Ryouseiken on September 25, 2010
    The sad twist of fate is? I actually ended up losing Tali, Thane, and Mordin in my first playthrough of the game. XD D: This is awesome though, Chapter 8 had me in suspense aha.
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  • From Ryouseiken on September 19, 2010
    Excellent chapter as per usual, it's entirely up to you how you approach Shephard/Garrus although I personally would love to see some hints of crushing/romancing. :) Keep up the good work!
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  • From Ryouseiken on September 17, 2010
    Great chapter yet again. :) Glad to hear Garrus is set in stone to live, haha; I would have loved to see more of the squad chime in to console Shephard as well but I totally get what you mean.
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  • From Ryouseiken on September 15, 2010
    Boy I hope Garrus at least doesn't die. :( I might sob like a mad man, haha. Good story thus far.
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