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By : ColdSilence
  • From ANON - Akaku on February 08, 2013
    NOOOOOOO!!! It cant end there!!! Sora!!! You know you have kinda made me hate Riku a little more for this...Lol. I hope you write more. I need to know if he turned Sora into a merman or not (cuz thats what i would do if i was as obsessed and selfish as Riku. Please write more!!!
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  • From Narrissa on February 05, 2013
    I cant wait for your next chapter and update. I check it every night. I hope you update soon. This cliffy is killing me lol. Keep up the great work XD
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  • From ANON - Shadowlilies on February 04, 2013
    I love this story and I don't mind you writing non-human/human pairings. It's awesome and helps you stand out. Plus if you love what your doing then why stop? It's your passion. Flow with it!

    This might be one of my favorite Kingdom Hearts fanfics and I've read MANY of them. I just wish you would update a little faster, but it's all good.

    Riku's a dick in this story, but I believe he'll get better once Sora can actually say how much of a dick he's been to him. I'm just saying. The truth shall set you free.

    Please make many more non-human/human stories! Plenty more, especially if they are going to be about mermaids, which I love! Thanks for this new chapter
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 24, 2013
    OMG it's getting even more EPIC! Were really getting into the nittygritty now, I could really feel the urgency in Riku's actions. And what are Sora's parents gonna think when they discover him missing and follow the trail of blood leading them to the ocean?! Oh the suspense is gonna kill me until the next chappie DX !!
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  • From ANON - Kei-Chan on January 22, 2013
    OMG WHY DID THAT CHAPTER HAVE TO END LIKE THAT!?!?!?!?! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IMMA GO INSANE!!!!! I NEEEEEEEED TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH CLIFFHANGER OF DEATH!!!!! DDDDDDDD:



    Freaking. Epic.
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  • From ANON - Fan on January 22, 2013
    OMG. UPDATE SOON PLEASE. this story is too good. i also really like ur writing style. succinct but filled with details. nice.
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on January 21, 2013
    oh my god thank you thank you thank you. I love this so much. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - ForgottenPrincess on January 11, 2013
    OMG! Poor Sora. That must have felt so freaky, and now this! Instead of just getting busy (even thought I love it) Sora should really teach him English or Japanese or How to communicate. I really dislike the Orca's even though they helped Riku impregnate Sora. But seriously even if he properly mates with Sora how can they be together. Sora can't breath underwater, and Riku doesn't have legs! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on January 11, 2013
    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I need to know more. I hate these long long long waits. Oh god oh god I need to know more as to whats going on to sora and what Riku will do when he finds out what he didn't know!
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on January 06, 2013
    OMG, now I'm gonna be hanging from suspense until the next chappie to find out what the heck happened! (O_o)
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  • From ANON - ForgottenPrincess on November 30, 2012
    So happy to get an update. I love Sora and Riku, they both have a lot of problems they need to deal with but i hope they make out okay. Mermaids....mpreg....political stuff....you have all my favorite wrapped in a nice package. The language barrier does pose a problem though. If only they understood each other. Sora wants love and Riku loves him even if he doesn't admit it yet. Poor Aqua! That's what she gets for not getting together with Terra sooner.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on October 28, 2012
    Oh yes the plot really starts to thicken! I'm so happy to see an update, thank you lots :D!!
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  • From ANON - Rainshi on October 17, 2012
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I love this story! IT just keeps getting better and better. I look foward to more.
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  • From ANON - ForgottenPrincess on September 10, 2012
    Aw!!!! Only four chapters....Sob...I love this story. Its wonderful and original yet not, just like the real KH! I can love how Riku is such a brat he looks like one. Sora is great, i love how he finally realised he was being a jerk. Really wish you would update. please. *offers plate of cookies*
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  • From Daydreamer79 on August 02, 2012
    I've really enjoyed this so far. I hope you plan to continue it. It's so rare to find quality Kingdom Hearts fics. I don't usually comment often, but this story deserved a comment. It is a rare gem of a fic and one I could not resist reading when I saw it while sorting through fics on AFF. :) Happy Writing.
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