Reviews for Story TimeBy : Amaronith |
DAMN this was cute. Cute as hell. In fact, I think my heart is overflowing with cuteness. I loved it, I love how Jak was referred as "sun boy" in dax's story, really gives you the warm feeling of Dax loving him and seeing him as perfect and warm as the sun. Also I liked how Jak seemed a bit sad and resigned every time Dax downtalked himself. I just like the idea of Jak trying to make dax realize how much he means to him.
I liked the writing, the style was nice. The part where Dax is narrating how he gave up proposong to Jak, the reason why he gave up, and Jak thinking "Ih god, dax... " made me go "AWWWWWW".I really needed some cuteness about them.
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