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Reviews for A Long Road Through Hell

By : errihuseamonster
  • From ANON - redmaple on November 11, 2010
    What a wonderful performance! The pacing was incredible. I think the rape in this chapter really let me know about Laina's strength. On the other hand, I was not expecting Jerlis to be so shrewed. He caught up pretty quickly on how he ended up there, even if it is mostly a very likely speculation. The fact that he remembered that dwarf so well makes me think that the traumatic events - along with the heavy isolation - have really sharpened his senses even though his circumstances are dull. Thank you for this chapter.

    As always, good reads.
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  • From Fawnheart on November 11, 2010
    Wow, this is excellent! I love reading stories written by people who obviously love actually playing the game and doing the quests - all the random dungeon/pvp tools have taken a lot of the reason to quest away which is a shame! It brings back heaps of memories and I have to say, I freakin' hated the quests with those demons in the outlands (...hellfire peninsular is a particular NOT favourite of mine hahaha), although their voices are pretty funny. I like how you started straight away with some action and then integrate descriptions of what the characters are in with the story, instead of saying so and so was this tall, that wide etc, for eg: I figured out the Laina was a warrior because she moved as fast as anyone in plate could. That makes the reading so much more interesting for me and I loved the quip about the magic bags as well as the conversational tone you've written it in but made the dialogue a little more formal when the belf talks, which makes sense. Lucky he is a mage so they get food eh? hehe. So I"m still only half way through your other story but I couldn't wait til I finished that one to read this one, I love your work and this story is very entertaining :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2010
    So far, I am more than pleased to see you back in here. Character development is very good, as always. I can feel much more interest in Laina than Kian because of her attitude. Laina seems to try to make the best of what she has. To be honest, that attitude reminds me a lot of a friend of mine. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you.

    This is Good Reads.
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