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Reviews for A Long Road Through Hell

By : errihuseamonster
  • From Kiriko on May 14, 2016
    If I could properly word my thanks to you for such an amazing story, I would. But, you'll have to make do with what I can manage to squeeze out. This story was phenomenal! The building of affection between two warring factions, between a Human and a Blood Elf, with just the right amount of hot action, led to an amazing night spent, reading and enjoying. Your story was enthralling, and the detail that went into this story made me feel the terror the two felt, and the love that built between them! I will readily admit that I was crying tears of happiness by the time I had reached the end of the story, and my panties were pretty thoroughly soaked too! Please keep writing, I would love to read more Warcraft stories, and if at all possible, I would love to hear what happens to Laina and Jerlis in their later lives! Maybe an insane adventure through Northrend, or even a possible pregnancy? Anyway, thank you so much for such an amazing story! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Enthralled on July 02, 2014
    How odd.. The reviews didn't show up. That said, it is good to see that such a lovely story received so much praise. I stand corrected, and wish many more views and reviews upon you!
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  • From ANON - Enthralled on July 02, 2014
    That this story has no reviews is an absolute travesty. It was engaging, addictive, and at its core beautiful. You truly fall in love with the main characters and empathize with their struggle. Thank you so much for sharing this story, it was simply amazing.
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  • From ANON - Outlawsavior on December 19, 2011
    This is by far the most well written and heart warming story that I have read in a long time. You have showed all of us who are reading this that only when you are stripped of freedom and put in a hell hole that is beyond your means of controlling is when you come to know you own limitations !! Also, being in the same hell hole with other people makes you forgot about how different you are from one a another just so the you can live to see another day !! And finally, with all of the hardships that Laina and Jerlis went through shows that it does not matter where you came from or what your background was like before hand as long as you are willing to raise up above the hate-ridge that separates us from one another, only then will we all understand how to love each other just for who are and not what people say we are to be !! True love indeed conquerors all boundaries in the end, if you let it !!

    P.S. Great job on writing a story that has a lot of heart and soul.....(and not the same old fuck fest fan fictions I'm used to reading).
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  • From coolwHip on January 14, 2011
    I loved this fic! :) It was well written and I enjoyed the story line. Laina and Jerlis are such a cute couple too. n_n I'm glad you finished it!
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  • From ANON - Achri on January 06, 2011
    Good story ^^
    I really liked it.
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  • From Federica42 on November 18, 2010
    Thank you so much for this story. I enjoyed every word.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 18, 2010
    I did NOT see that coming for the Epilogue. At all. I can't stop smiling. Thank you. Thank you very much. This was a wonderful, all-around magical story. I can only hope that it would continue but the closure tells me that it has most likely finished. I like happy endings. Ah.

    Yea... very sweet.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 17, 2010
    You left me sighing deeply, Errihu. It was raw. I hope this has a happy and conclusive ending like the foolish romantic I am. But something tells me it's going to be an ending that I wouldn't have expected, an ending that is worthy of this awesome story. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 16, 2010
    And now, revenge is waiting. Yes.... revenge.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 15, 2010
    Again, all the details of the story fit like a puzzle. What I want to know is if their relationship will endure once and if they make it to Outland. I don't want to think that the Draenai couple is some sort of omen. On a happier note, the love making in this chapter (six) was so relaxed. It even made me feel easy-going. Thank you for the chapter.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 14, 2010
    Chapter five has kind of turned most of my attention at the nature of their relationship. So far, the relationship is marked by a strong yet subtle regimen: opposites attract. Almost every contrast compliments their relationship in a way that overcoming the faction rivalry feels natural.

    Laina is physically superior (a warrior), self-motivated (exercising to keep in shape), and the more calculative of the two (coming up with the escape plan) although she is the female. These are characteristics we typically think as masculine. On the other hand, Jarlis is nurturing (cares for others), compromises more (accepted his imprisonment in order to survive as long as possible), and is physically inferior to Laina.

    These gender reversals are nice gears to kick the story in action. The characters make up the plot as much as they are involved in it.

    P.S. Chapter four had an action pace that was a lot easier for me to follow. The suspense was tasteful without being corny. It didn't overwhelm my senses. It was a nice side dish for the chapter that thoroughly complimented the main course. Chapter three's action sequence really kicked my ass. Yet the way the action was told made me feel like Laina was really all business. That mood was captured quite nicely although I didn't digest it as well. Literally, I had to re-read chapter three's action a couple of times. But mneh... I don't follow action too well. I have to stop everything and play it out in my head.

    P.P.S. Thank you. Wonderful chapter again.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 14, 2010
    The action and the sex in this story was much easier to follow - which I'm assuming is part of the mood. I will write a proper review when I'm not falling dead asleep. I found a couple of gems across your written landscape. One of them was "Hands and bodies did the conversing, lips traced eloquent poetry devoid of words across canvases of neck and jaw line, shoulder and chest."

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - redmaple on November 12, 2010
    What words are now engraved into my mind? “I beg your pardon Laina. It WAS quite a show.” It's a compact sentence but full of wit, said in an almost royal way. Also, I cannot stress enough how awesome the pacing of this story is. Every piece of the chapters are meticulously displayed, with no delaying extra baggage. The details direct my imagination but they are not bothersome. For example, though you present the "coordinate facts" about the treasure room, my own imagination glorifies it because you left most of the details blank (i.e. the gold glowed in a strange hue, or the treasure spiraled up in towers crumbling to their own weight). My notions will never compete against a list of details I can conjure up in my mind within seconds of thinking about spare "coordinate facts." What a wonderful story this is turning out to be.

    You might be tired of hearing it, but this is good reads.
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  • From Britomartis on November 12, 2010
    Hmmmm....here's hoping the demons make a serious error...I would love to see them get what's coming to them.
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