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Reviews for Sparkle and Shine

By : sillyneko345
  • From grimreaperchibi on November 29, 2010
    {Insert fangirl squeal here} Oh, wow, I am so in love with this story already and nothing much has happened yet. How sad am I? I think I'm gonna cry if those two don't get their acts together and confess by the end, though. Dax needs a happy ending, in every sense of the phrase. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Reva on November 29, 2010
    Shouldn't you bri like, wirting the last bit of "All that Glitters"? :P
    I was really suprised to see another new fic from you, since i somehow hadn't noticed you wanted to write anything about Light. Although, it came out pretty nice! The drawing scene was really cute and funny at the same time :3

    Oh, and the outtakes are as great as always...."Is he humping my dad??" xD

    Cant wait for the next chapter!


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  • From TaintedEmerald on November 29, 2010
    An incredibly good start to what seems like it's going to be an incredibly good story. I was wondering when you were going to start this, since you mentioned it a while ago. It was worth every bit of the wait. I liked how you addressed the in-game relationship that Jak and Keira shared, it really adds another level of complexity to this story series. Having Daxter put, what he considers to be, Jak's feelings above his own is a nice shift away from your other work.

    Can't wait to see them finally get together, and have a little fun as well of course.
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  • From GMB on November 28, 2010
    *begins to dance & hands author a dozen cookies* Thank-you for FINALLY writing this chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter and the final chapter to All That Glitters. *hug*
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