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Reviews for Gifts of Affection

By : Vaithen
  • From ANON - Jimmy on February 21, 2015
    You should make more of these stories , I love them all

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  • From tedgarrett on January 28, 2011
    Wow. Just, wow.

    When I first read this, I thought that chapter 4 was the end, and I came out with the opinion that it was a damn well-written story.

    ...And then you posted chapter 5 to 8 and my interest was piqued even more. By chapter 10 I'd gotten mood whiplash. Just as soon as it seemed that things might turn out for the better (I was actually happy that Senna forgave Vaen and was willing to be friends even after what he did.), things took a turn for the sinister. I actually feel really sad for Senna's character, she's the kind of pure-hearted character you'd hate to see bad things happen to.

    Right now I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting to see how the tome's plan pans out. So PLEASE update soon.

    Thanks.
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  • From xCubicZirconia on January 20, 2011
    He's still gonna get his ass kicked right? xD hope so
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  • From xCubicZirconia on January 13, 2011
    0.0 He's going to come back and save her, right?
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  • From Fawnheart on December 31, 2010
    Wow that was dark! And awww, I kept waiting for her to bust out and carve him a new one, you know, kick the full ten shades of shit out of him but...wasn't the way it was meant to go eh? His reason for doing what he did in the end (i.e. having too much to loose) is apparently why people kill their victims in real life, too...scary hey!
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  • From rosieposie on December 31, 2010
    Very interesting and dark. You -almost- make me pity him.
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  • From Fawnheart on December 27, 2010
    Nice writing, as always, and as dark as always, too. The shift in Vaen's attitude from a normal kind of guy you can empathise with into - well, I dont' want to spoil it for anyone by saying too much here - was really cleverly done. I hope you update this soon, I really want to see what happens next. Nice work!
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