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Reviews for Ending the Fan

By : JayDee
  • From Thundercloud on January 03, 2019

    Thank you for the story recommendation. I did indeed like it like you suspected even though I never played Oblvion. Not knowing the game made some parts of the story line a bit hard to follow, but all in all it was good read.


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  • From TheGravekeeper on August 06, 2017

    I have to say I've always loved your Ending the Fan series and especially Moz. To the point I go and re-read it all every so often and just worked up the nerve to say I think it's great and you're writing is amazing! :D


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  • From SillySilenia on May 12, 2013
    Well-written. Been a while since I last played Oblivion, but your story was written well enough that I remembered a lot of my adventures playing that game again, despite not having thought of Oblivion much in recent times - and that while the story is centred around a wholly different kind of adventures.


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  • From Daye on February 17, 2012
    I think this is the first chapter that really suffered from me not known a darn thing about oblivion.

    Still happy endings are good? And moz... fucked a god? serious bragging rights there i suppose.
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  • From ninesenshi on February 15, 2012
    I was surprised but happy to see another chap. Much more satisfying ending. One advantage to living in a world of magic is that death is not always the end. I am not familiar with this gameworld so I guess that there are no raise dead spells. But I'm glad they got together after all.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From porneater on February 06, 2012
    I've been following this fic from the beginning, and have to say that was probably the best sex scene in it. I liked how you scaled up all the bondage aspects so they would have an impact on Moz – she does seem to have a pretty tough hide, lol.

    The ending took me surprise though. Really didn't expect Fanroth to die like that, and actually felt something when he did, which is pretty unusual in porn – but then again, there are worse ways to go : )
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  • From ninesenshi on January 26, 2012
    Very hot last chap. Could really have done without the tragedy though.
    SailorNemesis
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  • From Daye on January 25, 2012
    Oh man. You killed off the Fan? :-( Poor guy. Total downer ending.

    Loved the bondage sex though. Really good. I just wish you could curb your murderous impulses towards innocent characters. Oh well least Moz managed to avenge him.

    What's next? Skyrim porn?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2011
    Great to see you're still working on this JD! Really nice futa scene there – almost as hot as your Buffy fic from a while back with Dawn getting her 'shaft'!

    Moz is an interesting character. Is she based on a real life Oblivion player character? Reminds me a bit of She-Hulk, only without the bashful charm (and tusks, lol).

    What fate awaits Antionetta in the dungeons of Battlehorn Castle I wonder...
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  • From bloodravyn on September 18, 2011
    lol, i thought for a second that the breton was gonna really gonna get that chance to kill Moz!
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  • From Daye on September 17, 2011
    Ha. Ha. Punderful. Born to be hung indeed. Can tell the assassin must have been low-born though; hanged is the past tense for people.
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  • From Ronin on June 27, 2011
    This is great stuff so far. I'd love to see the Champion really let herself go and get gangbanged by more well-hung creatures (other orcs maybe, or more minotaurs). At the same time, seeing her take a few more doses of that magical potion and really ream out some men would be really hot too.
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  • From AlexandraS90 on June 25, 2011
    Chapter 6 really was great. I didn't even care it lacked... certain content, and that's saying something. Love where the story's going, keep up the good work!
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  • From bloodravyn on June 23, 2011
    i love how she explaiend that, so impassioned was she
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  • From Daye on June 23, 2011
    Good use of the prompt. Even in such a brief word count the chapter was by turns amusing and touching. Nice to see there's some actual heroism beneath the rampant lusts, both blood and otherwise...
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