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Reviews for Ending the Fan

By : JayDee
  • From TyrantHand on June 21, 2011
    All I can really say is this is an awesome story, and I hope you continue. There's just something I love about strong, powerful women being helpless, or more exactly letting themselves be helpless. Powerful women who are secretly submissive and are just waiting for the right hard fucking to convince them to put on a dress and bend over happily. Unrealistic, but fucking erotic...excuse the pun.
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  • From bloodravyn on June 17, 2011
    this is beyond hot!
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  • From Daye on June 15, 2011
    I'm thinking Moz is lucky to have such bonuses to her endurance and strength.:P Otherwise she might not have made it through that.

    And Fanroth is a sneaky git but not too smart. Orc barbarians than can crush your head like fine china and kill people as a lifestyle choice are not the kind of people you [i]try[/i] and tick off.
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  • From Daye on June 02, 2011
    Dang! What a place to end it!

    Poor Bosmer! I wonder what length's he'll go to to outdo the Minotaur's performance?
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  • From Daye on May 13, 2011
    This fic just keeps getting better and better. Weirder as well but nothing wrong with that. Would have been interesting if Moz had followed through on her original threat.
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  • From ApolloImperium on January 03, 2011
    So many endings,ending of her arena career, ending of his virginity, ending of his obsession - what a complete use of the prompt!
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  • From Shadowknight12 on January 02, 2011
    Hahahah, nice one. Very sexy and evocative. Once again, your penchant for humour (Wood elves, eh?) does you credit, especially after this rather original way of getting rid of the annoying fan's incessant chatter. The sex was interesting and the writing had little details here and there to help the reader imagine the scene better. My only concern is that the fan doesn't become just as obsessed with sex!
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  • From Anesor on January 02, 2011
    This would be far more convincing that yelling at him to 'Get a life!'
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  • From FairySlayer on January 01, 2011
    The thought of a fight-arena geek, when it's a fight to the death situation (Orc or gladiator, etc.), never occurred to me before yet it makes perfect sense. Having a fanboy these days can be bad enough, but when he's making noise in a dangerous area it tends to attract unwanted attention. (Though it sounds like the Orc warrior may enjoy having a few skirmishes along the way.)

    "Wood elves" gave me a good laugh, though the end where he's "a fan no more" was sad in a way. Absolutely, having normal interests is important, but to drop such a passion for the games and especially for his heroine seems like a great loss. One can only hope he'll make up for the lost time having more real fun. Heck, he's still young. :)

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2011
    This was great! I was snickering the whole way through... the reason they're called wood elves indeed! I actually never thought about ending someone's obsession quite that way, but damned if it didn't work. :D
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