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Reviews for Endless Screams

By : AngelicPhantom
  • From Lanie12777 on January 09, 2011
    Two more very intense but extremely good chapters. I gotta be honest, I don't read much het anymore (I got hooked on yaoi!), but this story has me really liking the RikuKairi pairing (it will be RikuKairi, right?). Your descriptions of Kairi's childhood and her emotions are heartbreaking but so realistic, and I like the concept of Riku tapping into her memories to help him get a better idea of who she really is. And I feel like Sora is planning something, that can't be good for poor Kairi. Can't wait for the next chapter!:D

    **AFF doesn't have the feature to alert readers of new chapters, but I'm on fanfiction(dot)net under the same name, and you can add me to your alert list there if you want to receive notice of updates. I'm currently working on the next chapter of FLD, my co-author unfortunately still doesn't have a computer so I'm going solo for a while more. Hopefully I should have it posted within the next week or two.**
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  • From Lanie12777 on January 09, 2011
    Wow, really intense first chapter. The characters are really OOC, but sometimes it's a bit refreshing to see them that way instead, gives a completely different feel for them which can be hard to achieve. Excellently written, no grammar mistakes (which is a HUGE plus), you put such depth and emotion into the story. I feel so bad for Kairi, and though Sora is my favorite KH character, you did such a great job with your portrayal on his personality twist that it made me want to punch him. Very interesting, I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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