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Reviews for Turan

By : Agdistis
  • From ANON - Khaos on June 25, 2014
    I love this story. YOu said you had so much planed. What happened? Did you get tired of it?
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  • From KhaosKyuubi on January 04, 2013
    Okay, I know that this story probably won't be updated... But PLEASE UPDATE IT!!

    I LOVE this fic SO MUCH!!! It has everything I love in a fic!! Please tell me if you will or won't be updating it. And if you won't, I may be willing to take it off your hands.

    If you are interested, please E-mail me at khaoskyuubi@yahoo.com. Thank you. If you do not email me within a few months, I will assume that you don't care and that this fic is up for grabs.

    -Khaos
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  • From ANON - X on April 26, 2012
    I like your work, update soon.
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  • From DamascusWaterBlade on August 22, 2011
    Have you abandoned this? That's sad... I do so enjoyed the potential..
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  • From cuckolder1 on June 01, 2011
    Please dear god let there be more!

    This story is really well written and left me really wanting more. It was extremely hot and I really want to see this female warden get a chance to play outside the Fade.

    Please write more!
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  • From on May 24, 2011
    You have a great deal planned? What can I do to get you to share more of this story with us? This such an awesome start. I really wanted to see your herm warden work her way through ferelden's lladies. I read your pokegirl story and loved it. Please write more of this or that!
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  • From Locutus99 on February 10, 2011
    Hey! Another talented writer joins the dragon age section! This beginning is truly well done and I hope it’s the sign of another awesome sexual saga! You seem to be pretty talented at creating a unique mood. Jus that first paragraph, I found pretty exquisite and it let me know I’d stumbled upon something special.

    Very original, using the demon’s point of view to introduce your main character. It’s too bad we don’t know much about her though. Hopefully, we’ll learn more in the next chapter soon?

    The sex scene was pretty sexy. I like how lusty the main character seems. Hopefully, massive cocks will be a theme given the tags you put.

    Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter.

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  • From foxtrot11 on February 07, 2011
    Another good Dragon Age Story! This such a tease though! I hope there's more. The way the mage is totally into taking the demon's huge cock was good. Herm? She's gonna have one too to use on Morrigan and Leliana? I can't wait. You're a good descriptive writer too, so I'm really excited. Please continue it soon, this beginnning is really a tease!
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  • From DamascusWaterBlade on February 06, 2011
    This was pretty awesome. You seem to be a pretty good writer, and you created a pretty damn good intro to your story. I checked out your Pokegirl story. If this one's going to be as good as that one, then we're in for a treat. Can't wait for more!
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  • From OmegaX on February 05, 2011
    Gonna come right out, I fucking LOVED this. I can't wait to see how much further you take this. A demon enhanced Mage would make for an awesome Warden, and the potential for further corruption just makes me want to read more and more. Might I hope for a corrupted and depraved Leliana?
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  • From Cross838 on February 05, 2011
    This story was crafted with care. I appreciate the demon’s characterization, well done. An interesting look at the Harrowing Origin from a different perspective. Seeing his confidence crumble as she sprung her own trap was quite entertaining.

    The sex scene was exquisitely done. Some lines I appreciated:

    “Her hands groped along his length in a desperate way, not nearly big enough to wrap around his hardness but still trying. Her mouth in its current form was not large enough to encompass even half of his head, though she attempted to with wanton need.”

    “For some seconds, the lips of her cunt merely mashed against his rounded cockhead. Then, they began to give way and his tip entered into her. Only half of the head was inside the mage, but she had already begun crying out piercingly”

    “If her body had been real, it would have ruptured and been split in twain by his fencepost sized rod. Instead, the surreal nature of the Fade allowed her stomach to stretch to an obscene size as her pelvis managed to mash against his own.”

    Obviously, I like sex scenes with rather large male members. If by your tags, she is going to be using a rather large cock of her own in the real world, then I am very much intrigued. The possibility of manipulating and seducing her companions is titillating to say the least.

    I am very much excited by a talented new author in this section. I hope to see more soon!

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  • From StainlessSteelRat on February 05, 2011
    That was very hot. Pretty cool turning the tables on him. If there's more, I'll definitely be reading.
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  • From karlminion on February 05, 2011
    Wow, that was hot. Is she going to go all futa later on? That would make it even hotter!
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