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By : sillyneko345
  • From ANON - Nikki on March 06, 2011
    Dude, it's creepy how addicted to your writing I am, for real. XD I adored this chapter; over-protective!Jak for the ever-loving win. I can't wait for you to post the next one!
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  • From ANON - Zesaya on February 27, 2011
    Yay, another story from my favorite J&D author! :D Rock on. Your characterization is awesome as usual. Glad to see more ottselfic coming. It makes my dirty perverted little heart happy.
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  • From darkgloomie on February 26, 2011
    leave it to Jak to have inappropriate thoughts in public..

    Anywho, nice chapter (as usual). Poor Dax is having a rough day. Hopefully good ol' Jak will make it up for him, If You Know What I Mean...

    And.... Ooh, it's snowing! (randomm babbling)

    Uhm... Have a nice day and continue Keep Talking. Because you want to. Like I want to build you a shrine. And rain fiery death on it (don't worry, it's fireproof)
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  • From Amaronith on February 26, 2011
    Poor Daxter. That really sucked. But, again, Jak will make it better. Right after he punches Torn in his stupid tattooed face.
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  • From grimreaperchibi on February 25, 2011
    Torn drunk, huh? I'd pay good money to see that... No, wait, I'm working on something else, no more new ideas. You've opened the floodgates, just so you know. Between my muse and you, I'm gonna be busy for a while.

    I can't believe Jak tied him to a lamp post and left him out in the open like that. Well, scratch that, I can, I just don't want to. I want to believe (very desperately some days) that he's smarter than that. Strange animal + large open area - any sort of freedom = disaster. Daxter has the worst luck, too, which doesn't help anything either. And the bastard who thought he'd get rich quick totally deserves to have a broken arm. And a leg. And maybe a few teeth. Jak's got a lot to make up for; get your act together boy! Pamper that ottsel! He more than deserves it after a stunt like that.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on February 25, 2011
    Awwwww~ Poor Dax. First the ice cream thing, then some punk-ass kids thinking they can make a quick buck. Good thing Jak heard the scuffle. ^w^

    lmao Little shits deserved to have the piss scared out of 'em. XD

    Yeah, I'd say Dax needs a pick-me-up. But will he go for what I think Jak has in mind? Out of his rut, he might, or he might not...

    Yay! More suspense! XD I can't wait. ^//w//^
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  • From grimreaperchibi on February 21, 2011
    I've been chuckling all day over your "more ink on his face than would be found in the average stationary set." I don't know why; probably because I'm both a writer and a tattoo enthusiast currently having quite a bit of ink being put down right now myself. It's stuff like this that really makes me love your writing so much. I just adore your style!

    There's a part of me that wants to look at Torn and go, "Are you not paying attention? They wander around the whole city, jacking zoomers, blowing shit up, having the ever odd run in (literally) with a KG patrol, and yet said patrols don't seem to be any more inclined to pick them up. Did you really need to push the leash thing?" Yeah, yeah, I know, me and my continuity issues are messing with your plot point again. Ignore me and carry on! Please!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on February 20, 2011
    Duuuuude... lmao XD He bit Torn! And yes, the Tattooed Wonder DID have it coming. X3

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. So much can happen (good AND bad.) I'm almost on the edge of my seat just thinking of the possibilities. X3

    Until later. ^w^
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  • From ANON - Ezeku on February 20, 2011
    Dax biting Torn?

    /Yes/.

    I adore you for this, seriously. :D A lot of people try and fail to work the whole "Daxter is Jak's pet" into a plot worth reading, but this seems like it has an assload of potential. I hope this one gets updated quick; I can't wait to see where you take it from here. C:
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  • From darkgloomie on February 20, 2011
    this fic got me "d'aaaaaaaaaw!"

    I love you and hate you and want to write a J&D fic and want to play the last game I bought for my DS. So yeah, you make me conflicted. I'll curse you and worship you and build you a shrine and rain fiery death on it and...

    Yeah, I think you get it. I can't wait to see this continuing.

    (and yeah, Torn had it coming xD)
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  • From ANON - TheAnonThatGotAway on February 20, 2011
    You, I like you and all that you do. Now I summon you from the depths if whatever void you reside in to write faster and amuse me so.
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  • From Amaronith on February 20, 2011
    Heeee! Oh Daxter, life IS unfair, but you've got a hotass like Jak to make it better.
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