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Reviews for Warm and Warmth

By : dianetaylor
  • From RogueMudblood on August 09, 2011

    Couple of technical things:

    1) In the first paragraph you state "It was a tradition among Hylian noble men and women, but seldom observed among Hylian nobles or Royals." It's a bit of a contradiction there.

    2) When Link is ordered by Zelda to take off his clothes also, you have him removing her clothing. He had already done so in the previous paragraph.

    To content:

    I found this a very cute and sweet piece. It has great potential to be much more than a one-shot, but I can appreciate why you would not want to go beyond the story you have here. After all, once her year is up, this liaison between them must end.

    Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed the read.
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