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Reviews for Harkin's Victory

By : Masseffectfan
  • From stevemisor on April 06, 2011
    I really enjoyed the story
    I would love to see more chapters but maybe add some more detail to what people are wearing and how they act
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  • From JustS on March 29, 2011
    Great pairing, was really hot until the pissing stuff and Shepard mindlessly giving away her identity. Your general writing style would benefit from some polish. 3/5
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  • From AlexandraS90 on March 14, 2011
    I loved it. It was so hot to see Jane getting humiliated, tricked and pissed on like that. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of this brilliant story.

    If you'd have me, I'd like to offer my services as a beta-reader. I could comb over your work for any errors you may have missed, give you a few tips, and maybe tweak the story for the better. If you're interesting in working with me, hit me up at theirishapple@gmail.com

    Your fan,

    Alexandra
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