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Reviews for A Tale of Two Mothers

By : WotanAnubis
  • From ANON - KamiAizen on March 31, 2011
    Very amusing how you decided to make Hawke into a hermaphrodite! The main scene was very erotic but I think I like more how you decided to use Varric telling the story to Cassandra at the very end - I couldn't help but laugh there! Two thumbs way up!
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  • From chipperdyke on March 24, 2011
    Oh man, have you got Merrill's voice down pat. She's almost adorable here.

    Aside from inaccuracy (if you've got enough estrogen in your system to have boobs, it dries up your balls), which is TOTALLY forgiven by the Varric gimmick (brilliant, btw), this is yet another truly excellent read. Sexy, too, until the penis parts, but hey.

    In reply to yours: I meant off-site, because I'm not really familiar with most of the stuff you've written fics for? email me at synthwrr@hotmail.com if you're down.

    Also, I assume that dialog was while Isabela was apologizing? I thought about including that scene, and I could have done a lot with it, but in the end it just wasn't interesting enough for me. As far as Hawke teasing about spanking Isabela? Before they have their convo in Ch 2, it just wouldn't make sense for the character.

    Thanks for reading though! You've got a way around words. I love it.
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