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By : sillyneko345
  • From ANON - Kuromei on November 24, 2011
    lol Poor Daxter. I'd totally want to kick Ashelin's ass, too. Then again, she'd probably kick mine right back, once the surprise wore off. XP But it's the thought that counts, right?

    Now, now, what does Razer want? Hopefully it's just to chew out Daxter for derailing his plans of getting laid. REALLY hope it's just that. Other possibilites include bodily harm upon a certain redhead, after all. :(

    See you later!
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on November 24, 2011
    Zomg, Daxter's little 'story'? That was good. Can't wait 'till the real thing. :3 Although, I am suddenly becoming worried about the Razer thing. Don't hurt Daxxie, Razer. :(

    And bad Princess! No more Deluxe TV packages for you!
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  • From grimreaperchibi on November 22, 2011
    How in the world I never managed to review the last chapter, I'll never know and leaves me very ashamed. Could've sworn I had, but that's probably what I get for swearing, right? Neko apologizes.

    Moving on! I think it would be completely appropriate at any point in the near future for Ashelin to get beaten with anything that will leave painful, lasting bruises. So not cool to kiss someone else just to make your current toy jealous, *especially* when said toy is doing everything you want him to do anyway. Couldn't just make a lame excuse to disappear for a minute and have a quickie in the broom closet, could you? Nope, gotta kiss the oblivious blond. Daxter's got more self-control than I, because I would have kicked her ass back to Haven via Aeropa and the Underworld if I'd had to sit quietly through something that.

    So...um...am I the only one craving BBQ now? Sig, you cook your heart out for me any day! Who needs a sense of taste anyway??
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  • From ANON - Kami Count D on November 16, 2011
    Oh, please please, hurry and update. Great story so far, great sequel to one my fave jak/dax stories. You are my favorite writer for this pairing. I've read everything you've posted here and on ff.net. so please, i can't wait!!!
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  • From TaintedEmerald on October 05, 2011
    Finally got around to reading it, and I'm glad I did.

    Wasn't really expecting the two to make such a mess on Razor's furniture. Kind of makes you feel sorry for the guy (although I gotta admit that I probably wouldn't mind finding the Demolition Duo making out on my couch). At least the rest of his house is nice and clean.

    Loved seeing more of Jak's submissive side, as well as how clumsy he can be when spying on certain redheads. Characterization and grammar were spot on as usual, and dare I say the lemon is getting even steamier.


    Anyways, loved the chapter, and can't wait for the next update!
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  • From lolzacid on August 12, 2011
    I come home from vacation and you have a nice shiny chapter up! *happy shuffle*


    I laughed so hard at the "smokey", I don't even know why it's so funny, but it is!

    Hmm, Daxxey getting some top time, eh? This is relevant to my interests. But then again, this whole section is, but this is more specifically relevant.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on August 11, 2011
    OMG roflmao XD If only Razer knew that Dax spanked Jak with his spatula... Doesn't matter if it got washed right after, he'd burn it. X3

    But uh oh. Drama is on the horizon? Ooooooh~! Delicious. >)

    See you later. ^w^
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  • From TaintedEmerald on June 10, 2011
    And so the plot starts to thicken. Lurker pet is awesome, shower scene (consensual this time) was awesome, and reminding Dax that he owes Razor cleaning/handyman chores was hilarious.


    Favorite part was probably Dax messing with Jak during the movie, although I am wondering if doing all that Ottsel Dax x Jak fiction is starting to bleed over into your Human Dax x Jak stuff...not that I mind one bit.


    Looking forward to finding out what the main conflict is going to be in this arc. Loving it so far though. Happy writing, and have a great summer!
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on May 27, 2011
    You know the best part about these outtakes? You could totally put them in as part of the actual story, and it would totally work. Especially that last one. :D

    Also, I can't wait to see what crap Razer puts Daxter through THIS time. I guess it doesn't matter, as long as Razer keeps giving out tips to Dax. Maybe he'll lend Dax the "Intermediate Moves" book. Work him up to advanced. Oh God, or what if JAK asks? I cannot wait to see where this story will go!

    ... Pft-hahaha!!! *snrk* Princess... BWAHAHAHAHAHAheeheehee... XD
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  • From lolzacid on May 27, 2011
    Shower scene! Comming out great, can't wait to see what Razor has in store for Daxxey!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on May 22, 2011
    lmao XD Oh, gawd. Loved it all. And Sig taking a Lurker dog as a pet? HA! He would go and do that, wouldn't he? X3

    Outtakes are gold, as always. ^w^ Although I AM wondering how Jak will react when Dax has to play housekeeper for Razer. I can't remember if Jak knows about the little deals Dax made with him, or not... I might have to reread a certain something to refresh my memory. ;3

    Until later! ^w^
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  • From grimreaperchibi on May 22, 2011
    Oh, holy damn. I really wish I could figure out why those two having sex in the bathroom was sooo freakin' hot. But it is, and I absolutely love it! *glomp hugs* Thank you!!! This has made me so insanely happy, you don't even know... I agree with Jak--let's just make it all amazing, and I'm sure you will. You've totally spoiled me so badly with this, by the way.

    *BLUSH* And thank you for the plug. I don't think my writing's that amazing, but obviously my opinion doesn't matter in this case. My muse thanks you.
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  • From ANON - gloomie on May 21, 2011
    this is the sound of me choking on my own laughters from the outtakes.

    also, FINALLY you continue this. You left me hangin', that's not nice :( nah, jk, totally worth it.

    i bet Jak is gonna go all jealous over Dax's "cleaning duty" and threaten bodily harm to Razier (possibly using Razier's own body). After all, he said so himself, that's what he does.

    So basically now, Sig gets a pet, Keira gets a way back home, everybody has a new couch, and Razier gets the juicy retelling of the Demolition Duo's sordid new tales? That's totally something I'd love to see.

    also, I'm feeling self-conscious. As always ya make me want to write (I even bought Jak II so I don't have excuses like "not knowing the setting") but the only thing I feel comfortable writing as of now is basically a mopefest, and I hate those -.- Apparently I do angst better than fluff, but I like fluff better than angst, and this impasse is eating me up xP.

    And yet, I don't know why I just typed all that in this review. Non-sequitur rules!

    (yea yeah, nice way of keeping it fresh by adding variables, and delightful of you to keep the details from TtM and work 'em in here and yadda yadda. You're good. You know it. I'm bloating your ego like a pufferfish. Love the story, though now I wonder if Jak will be as, let's say, flexible as he seems to be in the games (wink wink). Seriously, he's like always spinning on dangling ledges and stuff. I bet if the whole "savior-of-the-world-twice-over" gig doesn't work out, he can always join a circus)

    so yeah, g'night and hope to see you keeping this up soon!
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  • From Amaronith on May 21, 2011
    The Mayor is a tightwad. I love this chapter so much! Poor Daxter. XD
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  • From TaintedEmerald on April 10, 2011
    The long awaited sequel is off to a great start! Nice to see it pick up right where it left off. I've been wondering how this storyline was going to progress since you mentioned there being a sequel, and I can't wait for the next installment to see how the Demolition Duo are going to play it back in the garage.
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