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Reviews for Love is War

By : grimreaperchibi
  • From sillyneko345 on June 13, 2011
    I think this is my favorite chapter so far, and not just for the hot chair sex. Although it is awesome chair sex.

    The conflict with Keira, I knew it was coming. Knew it. And you handled it so nicely. Also, I love how Jak asks Daxter to lead him like that, for a change. Sometimes Jak just needs to let go and let someone else take care of things. The redhead sure came through in that area, didn't he? There's hope for these two yet.

    This is currently my favorite story in any fandom, so you'll know. Any time you need a cheerleader, or a beta, or some virtual cookies to keep you going, you know where to find this fangirl.
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  • From Amaronith on June 10, 2011
    Unf. So sexy. This was exactly what I needed today...

    Also: Heeee Evil Widgit...
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  • From sillyneko345 on June 02, 2011
    I'm so sorry I slacked. I admit it. Please find it in your heart to forgive me!

    A-hem. Here's where I again praise your decision to follow the game storyline. Little Jak and Kor gave me the shivers. And remembering the plasmite bombs made me shake my fist in fury at Daxter. That was so hard to beat! A-hem again. The shower scene is awesome. I can't think of more to say than that. You really nailed Daxter's desperation on the head. I'm glad Jak was able to step past his insecurities to give his partner that release. Looks like they both needed it.

    Stoked for chapter five! Stoked like you wouldn't believe.
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  • From sillyneko345 on June 02, 2011
    I've read this chapter several times now, and I just love the pace at which the story is progressing. It's not too fast, and it's not drug out unreasonably. It's sweet in parts (their kisses, gaah, so cute!) but there's also uncertainty and a little angst (Dax not knowing at first what Jak's reasons for kissing him were). And Jak launching him into the pond at the end... hilariously evil.

    You're doing an excellent job establishing their romantic relationship believably based on their already tight BFF relationship. It gives me the warm squishies inside.
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  • From Amaronith on May 30, 2011
    Oooo, nicely done... And Jak, you are not Han Solo! There is a better response to "I love you" than "I know", though I get the distinct feeling there's a reason jak didn't say it back. Maybe I'm just crazy. I can't wait to read what happens next!
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  • From Amaronith on May 22, 2011
    Oh my God so many FEELINGS, I can't even! I love the way you write these two, the banter is spot on perfect and I just want to roll up in this fic and snuggle it to pieces.
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  • From sillyneko345 on April 27, 2011
    I'm loving this story so hardcore, it's not even funny. Just wanted you to know that.

    This chapter was just as excellent as the first. Daxter's mental fight with himself was very believable. I'm glad he did decide to tell Jak his feelings, even if he had to get drunk to do it. And Jak's reaction to that kiss was just... cute. Jak was cute. That's the only way I can put it. He deserves some lovin' on after all that lame prison time. Matter of fact, Daxter deserves some lovin' just as much, for all that lame trying-to-stay-alive-on-the-streets time. Therefore, this should work out if they play their cards right. I hope I hope I hope...

    Thanks for such an awesome read. It's been a while since I squealed when I saw an update on a fic, and I definitely squealed today.
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  • From Amaronith on April 26, 2011
    *Glee!* Oh I love it! I didn't see anything wrong with the chapter, myself, but maybe that;s because I spent the whole time grinning like an idiot! I hope the boys manage to work something out.... I can't wait to see what happens now! *sparkle~* This chapter totally completed my good day.
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  • From Amaronith on April 08, 2011
    I am super excited about reading more of this! I'm really enjoying it so far, and I really dig the setup! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From sillyneko345 on April 08, 2011
    You have made me so, so happy by posting this, you don't even know. It was indeed just as good as your first story -- and multiple chapters, no less? Bliss!

    This first chapter was plot-tastic, man. Sometimes straight-to-sex can be nice in its own way, and then sometimes you just want a nice build up of plot and back-story and emotion, and that's just what was delivered here. Poor Dax. That seems like a very realistic conversation that they would have had. Letting something so bad happen to your best friend, even if you really had no choice, would generate a lot of guilt.

    The hugs and snuggles were a perfect counter-balance for the sad, though. Hopefully the sad is done with for them, and they can spend the next chapter staying cozy together (and maybe something more...?)

    Anyway, I'm absolutely loving it, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I may have to hang up my keyboard at this rate and just let you take over writing for the fandom. You're that awesome. (Just kidding. Not about you being awesome, because you are, but about not writing anymore. I have to keep writing because I'm going to write you a Jak/human!Dax in the shower scene in the next chapter of Keep Talking. Just 'cause you asked so nicely.)
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