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Reviews for Love is War

By : grimreaperchibi
  • From ANON - Ryangley on April 29, 2012
    What a story, what a wonderful writer. Thank you for this.
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  • From CloudSister on April 11, 2012
    This! This was amazing! This whole story was such an adventure! I've been reading and watching and waiting for this since you posted that amazing, catching first chapter! I have loved every single moment of this amazing ride! And though I am saddened that it's done I am soo relieved that it's done! I love it! You have the most amazing way with word choice! An the incredible way you've taken these characters and spun them up to be soo much more and yet still very much themselves! You are amazing! You have accomplished something flat out fantastic in this! I be rereading this and showing it off for years! Thank you for creating it! Thank you for posting it! Thank you so much for letting us read it! Good luck in everything you try! I can't wait to see whats next!
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  • From sillyneko345 on April 06, 2012
    Aww, I am now all warm and gooey inside! Such a nice ending for the boys. Even though we as readers/players know what happens after, it's still wonderful they're able to have moments like that now. And I know I've commented on this before, but you followed the game so well. Everything was woven in just perfectly with your own spin on things. Masterful, neko. Masterful.

    I have seriously enjoyed watching this fic unfold. You did an excellent job with it! And I'm sorry for the whole Rule 39 thing. Really I am. You believe me, right...?
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  • From Amaronith on April 06, 2012
    ALL OF MY FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Franko on January 15, 2012
    Truly amazing, I've followed this story from day one and loved every second of it, it's so beautiful.
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  • From Amaronith on January 14, 2012
    *floats by in a bucket on a a wave of sap* I'll see you at the end~!
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  • From ANON - Ryangley on November 30, 2011
    This is the best Jak fiction I have ever read. Your style, characterisation and mingling with the lore and nuances of the games make me jealous of your ability as a writer. Aaaand end gushing kiss-assery.
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  • From sillyneko345 on November 21, 2011
    Derp-corgi apologizes for her forgetfulness. Shan't happen again, chief.

    Now. I know I've shared a few thoughts, but I'll reiterate my favorite thoughts. This chapter is extremely well rounded. Sexy and action-packed all at once makes me a happy reader in many ways. The beginning is delightfully hot, and the ending is delightfully BA. I thank you again for not allowing Vin to die as per canon. He got a chance to show his own BA bravery! Go, Vin! *waves the Vin flag*

    Anyway, you're in the thick of the action, now. I know it's a slippery slope to the end of the game, and you're doing wonderfully. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From Amaronith on October 13, 2011
    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Augh, so so excited for this chapter you have no idea! The race! And the boys making up (and out)! And, okay, so my questions were mostly answered, but where is Widgit? ((Obviously I have some idea, having played the game before, but...))
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  • From sillyneko345 on October 13, 2011
    Aww! I absolutely love the ending. That's a great way for Jak to make up for being an ass. And really, Dax deserves to be carried for the awesomeness he just unleashed. You go, little redhead.

    I still love how you're following the games with this storyline. It really adds to the whole thing. Can't wait for the next installment, as usual, even if it means things get hectic for our favorite duo. Cheers!
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  • From sillyneko345 on August 16, 2011
    Even though I know it's all going to turn out alright, it still makes me cringe. I feel sorry for everybody! Poor little scared Widget, poor beat up Daxter, poor freaking out Jak. Wait, I don't feel sorry for young Samos. Or Torn. Well, almost everybody.

    Here's to hoping that Widget is recovered soon, and Jak and Dax can calm each other down after all they just went through. Tough read, but a good one nonetheless!
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  • From Amaronith on August 16, 2011
    Oh poor Daxter! But what about Widgit?! And those images Jak got?! Why must you end the chapter like that?! *waits eagerly for the next one*
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  • From ANON - Mari on August 16, 2011
    Well, I feel a bit stupid, but this is the first chapter I've read while actually listening to the song you provide. I quite like the experience, though, it gave a really interesting flavor to reading the events, it certainly had a sort of chase-like quality to it. I think I need to go re-read the other chapters while listening to their songs. :P

    And bravo on a well-executed violence scene, the whole sequence was exciting and believable, and I definitely haven't read it before. Daxter spitting in Erol's face was of course epic. Gotta love him.

    I know you said you weren't satisfied with this chapter, but I actually loved it :3 As well as the whole story, I don't believe I've mentioned that, I've just been lurking, lol. Keep writing, you do it well!


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  • From sillyneko345 on July 12, 2011
    I know I've said this before, but I'll just say it again: you are one seriously multi-talented writer. The insane action in the beginning of this chapter is, personally, better than an action movie for me. So much detail. And you let Daxter show his tough stuff, too, which is definitely appreciated. He'd be dead already if he wasn't tough, and seeing him in action, even if he's still (justifiably) a little freaked out is satisfying.

    And the fluff at the end. My lord, the fluff. Jak and his horn-fondling purrs is so adorable, I can't even. I love how they interact, Dax always reassuring no matter what happens. You make my little heart go all soft and melty. Excellent update!
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  • From Amaronith on July 12, 2011
    Oh this was chilling in all the good ways it possibly could be. I am loving this fic more and more every time I read through it!
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