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By : sillyneko345

From grimreaperchibi on February 01, 2012
*All* the cookies!!!! Okay, I feel better now.

I like to think that our association is mutually beneficial, what with the free flowing of ideas and not letting someone kill someone else in a moment of psychotic rage. *glares at Razer* That being said, I will always be more than willing to help you keep your shit together, even if when it might be more fun to watch it all burn down. I have stubbornness issues like that. And look! You got the chapter all done and I only had to take the poker out of the fire once!! That wasn't nearly as bad as you thought it would be, now was it? Relax some and enjoy what you're doing. Just...don't leave me alone in this. It would be a sad neko if it was left behind.

I still say Jak should have ended up a pole somewhere along the line. And the spider hissing?? Holy damn, the next time I have a nightmare where that happens, I am so totally going to find you and kick your ass for that. Still finding it funny, but yeah, you will feel wrath.
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From ANON - Mari on January 09, 2012
*GROPEGROPEGROPE*

Man this fic is getting fun...The image of Dax in Jak's jacket is just TOO cute. And I grow increasingly more curious as to how their first kiss is going to happen, especially now with the rumor mill going on them. You say the first kiss is going to be soon?

OH MAN BRING IT ON :D

Because Dax is already so insufferably adorable and fuzzy about Jak and they aren't even in a relationship yet XD

LOVIN' IT, not that I need to tell ya, and GRC doing the Razer/Phoenix arc was an awesome plan. Looking forward to updates!
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From ANON - Franko on January 07, 2012
Ooh, waking up next to Jak, boo leaving with out sex. Ultimate disappoints were had.

Lol, fountain dunk.

Yay showers!

My god Dax is too cute.
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From CrabRangoonMonster on December 29, 2011
*grope grope grope*
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From ANON - Revai on December 29, 2011
Just wanted to let you know, I'm still reading every single story of you and still am a big fan! Just don't have the time to comment everything that often.

As usual, great work, great story, made me laugh and giggle and I'm excited how you manage to pair these two up this time.

But i really had to laugh hard, when i read "German bomb". Until I realized you just ment Razer :D You know what's funny? In German he has of course not a german accent, neither a Swiss oder Belgian one or something...but he just sounds gay! I mean the original already sounds a little gay, but the german version tops it.

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From ANON - truthasfarasitgoes on December 29, 2011
Yaaay! Another chapter! Much squealing and running in circles! But, what's this? A negative note? Your lost, you've gone to look for yourself, if you get back before you get back, we should tell you to wait? Aaaigh! If this means the worst case scenario where you've lost the thread of the story and updates will much delayed or never, I'll be over here, in the corner, fetal, going through withdrawal. (Humor aside, if there is some sort of real situation that drove that comment, then I wish you all the luck in resolving it!)
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From ANON - Kuromei on December 28, 2011
Bwa ha ha ha haaaaa~! XD Razer's reaction was priceless. But we all know he liked it. ;3 At least, while he was in La-la Land.

Torn's deep, gravelly voice, doing an impersonation of a Valley Girl. omg I nearly busted a gut at that. XD Then, of course, Jak and Dax's little plunge. This whole chapter has been priceless, just like every one before. ^w^ Can't wait for the next one!
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From grimreaperchibi on December 28, 2011
The neko basks in the light of helpfulness, even though she feels she has been slacking in her duties. And yes, Jak will forever be the fake jock all fake jocks are measured against, only to be found wanting. For the record, I find slim molds can be very cute (blame the muse and xkcd for that one).

*snickers* Third time I've read it, and I'm still stuck with a double-take when Dax starts saying whatever it is that he thinks is going to get him out of trouble. I know it's there, I'm waiting for it, and yet, my innocent eyes, they like to skip over it with an air of "he totally didn't just say that." Makes me wonder what else he's gonna say when Razer figures out his moment of inattentive bliss was captured for posterity. It's going to take a lot of fast talking and probably faster running to get out of that one. And oh, the stories Killer could make a killing on later, if only little paws could type...

Just so you know, there's a part of me that really, really, *really* wants Phoenix to suffer with a massive hangover somewhere in all of this. Blissful idiot boy deserves it, after all.
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From TaintedEmerald on December 27, 2011
Looks like I missed a couple of updates...well, guess that means I get to read three chapters at once!

Sorry about being MIA. School was hectic this semester, and a certain game has been sucking the life out of me *cough*skyrim*cough*.

Anyways, wow. Really liking the dynamic you've got going between the two characters. The race sequence was awesome, and it really seems like an evolving relationship rather than a rushed one. Sometimes slower is better, even if it means waiting to get to the romantic parts. Not that it's empty in that department, what with the ending to the latest chapter. I wonder how Dax will react when he wakes up the next morning...

Anyways, time to catch up on your other fics. I feel kind of bad for missing so many of your updates.

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From ANON - Mari on December 19, 2011
HONESTLY this is ridiculous...I don't think I've ever re-read a fanfic, maybe not even a regular novel as much as I have these 5 wonderful chapters. This might be a sign of obsession that I might need to worry over...

This story gets better and better the more that goes into it, the more detailing and kind of tweaking of the guys' personalities and interactions with each other, the more college life they get into...Like you're taking two characters that never cross paths in-game and making their relationship seem so completely natural it's like they're supposed to be that way! I'm about as eager to read everything Razer/Phoenix as I am all things Jak/Daxter. Razer being a snarky closet mother hen and Phoenix being completely oblivious is so much delicious fun.

And Daxter just keeps getting cuter and cuter...I wonder just how much longer Jak can hold out on completely glomping him. Hmm, I wonder if this fake boyfriend idea will crop up again in the future?

And man I can't wait for the next morning to come, Daxter to find Jak in bed with him and Razer to be snuggling with Phoenix(or vice versa)...It's going to be epic.

ALSO ALSO ALSO. I love the Jinx reference in there! I hope he gets to make an appearance sometime! :D
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From ANON - truthasfarasitgoes on December 18, 2011
thankyouthankyouThankYouThankYouThankYouTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!! I read the newest chap. almost as soon as it was out but didn't get a chance to respond until now, even though I have already read it several times. I gotta say that, with all the foreshadowing you've thrown in, I could see this going in a number of directions and I can't wait to see how you develop it. I also love how the complexity of your storyline has grown and matured since, say, All That Glitters. Your inventiveness is amazing.

Can't wait for the next chapter! (And rest assured that, if it takes too long, I am not above begging as you have already seen!)
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From ANON - Kuromei on December 07, 2011
roflmao I can TOTALLY see Keira keeping cheerleaders at bay. Brandishing her wrench when appropriate... HA! XD

lol Razer was such a mama hen... SO funny to think of. X3 Makes the outtake that much better. XD

Jak's quick-thinking, though... Nitro boosters on a TRACTOR? OMG lmao XD If it happened as often as Jak seems to imply, no wonder he's so quick with it. X3

Totally loving everything, Robin. Looking forward to the next update. ^w^
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From CrabRangoonMonster on December 07, 2011
Jinx + chem lab tech = YES.

Phoenix + Gushers = me wanting to do naughty things with Phoenix and Gushers (even though the watermelon ones are my poison)

Two things. �When are we gonna see the first kiss? �Because I know that's gonna lead to some epic awkward, which always leads to sex (as per the rules of fanfiction/the internet).

And when are we gonna see Tess? �If Jak befriending him confused Daxter, Tess giving him attention is gonna give him an aneurysm, and that I wanna see.
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From ANON - Franko on December 07, 2011
That ending sounds like it will make a nice wake-up call ;3

You portray Dax so cutely, it's like he IS seven, well done.

Love what you're doing to Razor, he's so cute as well.
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From Spaikd on December 05, 2011
Oh my God, this chapter is *perfect*! Your sense of comedy is undownable. Death by pompoms, indeed. And yusss, drunken sleep cuddles! Win!
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