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Reviews for Room and Board

By : sillyneko345
  • From Amaronith on December 05, 2011
    Gaaah, I am going to DROWN IN ALL THE LOVE I HAVE FOR THIS FIC. ALL THE LOVE.

    Razer and Phoenix need to end up cuddling and making out sooner rather than later plz. Jak and Daxter can have more tension build between them when they catch Phoenix and Razer going at it in the showers. *nodnod*
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  • From grimreaperchibi on December 05, 2011
    I'm going to be snickering over Jak's panic-attack in the face of the cheer squad for a while. Daxter's right, he's a fake jock, not the least bit interested in looking. Not touching I can understand, but he's male and he didn't even look? Not that I'd really blame him from walking the other direction, away from the whore-core. Anyone who can do everything you just described is probably carrying more creepy crawlies than plague rats. (Who? Me? Biased? Never, why do you ask?) And I'm always willing to be helpful. I'm just glad my babbling worked out for you.

    And Razer, sweetie, you should know better, so you can't complain about what you get. *cackles evilly*
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  • From ANON - TruthAsFarAsItGoes on November 26, 2011
    Ok, being honest here, this is not a review, its a pleading: pleasepleasepleasePleasePleasePleasePLEASEPLEASEPLEASE I need more of this. I check back daily for a new chapter. I just love your stuff having re-read many times All That Glitters, Talk To Me, Keep Talking, etc. Now, I'm wearing the bits out re-reading and re-reading Room and Board. Just great! Of course, thank you for all that you've done so far in all your other stories, but I desperately hope you can manage to find the time to finish this one, please please please *echoes of please fading into a ring-modulated whimper...*
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  • From grimreaperchibi on November 02, 2011
    *le sigh* This makes me so happy. I have no idea why, but it does. It's about time Daxter started feeling good about himself, and that race was a good start. I don't think he's quite ready for life on a sports team, considering how he still tried panicked at the *thought* of people watching him screw up, but there's still that great burst of confidence for not only doing well, but having the people he (knowingly or unknowningly) looks up to. I can't wait for the game stuff, which is an accomplishment, trust me. Four years and I never cared this much about a Homecoming game, so congratuilations.

    (And for the record, I think I'm going to start calling Phoenix 'Idiot-boy' on Razer's behalf. The thoughts are starting to bubble, toil, and cause trouble...)
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on November 01, 2011
    Woo hoo! Go Orange Lightning! Does their school have a Track & Field scholarship? 'Cuz I think Dax'd be a shoe-in. X3

    Awesome chapter. Awesome awesome. XD Furret-y cuteness, sports victory and buddy-buddy warm fuzzies, all to be had. ^w^

    Lovin' it! See you later. :D
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  • From Amaronith on October 31, 2011
    HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yay Daxter! I loved this chapter, so so much. and Awww, Razer... don't worry, hon! Phoenix will get the idea soon - right?
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  • From ANON - xVelpinx on October 19, 2011
    I love love love this adorable story and cannot WAIT for it's update. In fact this is one of my favorite stories in the JaD community. The outtakes made me lol. xD
    Keep writing! I desperately wish to see the outcome of Dax's "shining moment." You led into it very fluidly, I felt that it wasn't even rushed.
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  • From Spaikd on September 23, 2011
    This update just made my day. *__*
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  • From ANON - Mari on September 22, 2011
    I found this latest update while I was sick yesterday, so it was an awesome comfort and good read between all the naps I was taking, lol! I'm loving the warm fuzzies that Daxter's already getting, also how he's still adjusting to life with a football player. I don't really know what else to say right now, but this is pretty much my current fanfic obsession, it's just a joy to read, no matter how many times I do it XD Can't wait for what's next!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on September 21, 2011
    roflmao Very eventful week for the boys, coming up. It'll be interesting to see how they cope. And how many other warm, fuzzy moments there'll be. ^w^

    Outtakes, as always, are lol-worthy. XD See you later!
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  • From grimreaperchibi on September 21, 2011
    I've said it once and I'll say it again. Jak's a squirrel!!! And Taryn should totally find a way to kill someone with a breadstick. I want a graphic description of this so that I may emulate it if the need ever arises. I know my life; it will be meaningful at some point.

    You're doing great, no matter what you think. And you were worried about how this chapter was going to turn out... Keep going!
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on August 22, 2011
    Oh,and for that second-to-last outtake, I thought nobody found Jak intimidating because of 'The Lost Frontier'.
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  • From ANON - Mari on August 01, 2011
    Oh darn you and your good stories. XD I'll have you know that my mind is full of imaginings and wondering where this story is going to go and what Erol's going to do to be an asshole next, when and how the boys are going to fall for each other...Augh I can't wait to read all this story. But yeah, I think I've figured out that I really like your writing style because you don't have to describe something or a feeling for an entire paragraph, you just say the right words in like, a sentence or two and the message hits home. It's very striking and I'm reading my own WIP J&D pieces again and again, trying to see if I can manage to have that same ability to make my writing pop.

    Anyway, the chapter; I hope this isn't shadenfreude, but I somehow thoroughly enjoy seeing Erol be a complete creep, I'm wondering what his AU background is and how many times Jak has to beat his ass to get the message across(something tells me it won't be quite soon enough for poor Daxter)...I think it's just seeing how Jak absolutely defends Daxter whenever he's threatened that makes me love the conflict. I haven't seen too many fics where Erol goes after Daxter, but this is probably the best.
    And Daxter's past...Well, lets just say I'd be a little freaked out by football players too, if that happened. Good build-up for it.
    (Love how Jak wants to punch walls over it though. Protective Jak is the best Jak.)

    Well I'll bother you next chapter then... Looking forward to it! Oh, also, the outtakes are a part of your awesomeness. Hilarious.
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on July 29, 2011
    Zomg, usually I couldn't give two flying fucks (pardon the saying)about these school type stories, and I don't know if it's because it's J&D or because it's your writing (probably both), but I am LOVING this story. I love how the characters are worked in, too, especially Torn. :3 Hehe, staple gun. But holy hell psycho-saurus rex from the family pervertidae, WTF WAS THAT? O-o *hides in the cage with the ferret*. This one neeeeeeds updating. :D
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  • From lolzacid on July 29, 2011
    Looks like you were right, there is nice new chapters posted when I forget about here and come back.


    I think Erol is mad. Half expecting a Trollface picture on his door when he wakes up. Would be very cash.

    Good timing there Razor.


    BTW: I liked the "sloppy Seconds" outtake. You are comedy genius.
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