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By : sillyneko345
  • From CrabRangoonMonster on December 30, 2014
    So, yeah, not a review, but I looked back - my first review ever for this story was in mid-2011. That's probably about the time I started reading this.

    And in the homecoming game chapter, where Phoenix pulls a Hail Mary tackle for Jak? It mirrors his sacrifice in The Lost Frontier, right? You wanna know when I figured that out?

    Today.

    Freakin' today.

    3 AND A HALF YEARS.

    That's it, it's been a great run, but my fanfiction reading license is being revoked. Done.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 10, 2014
    It sucks that Taryn wiped out, but at least Dax was there to step up. Even if he didn't realize he was doing it in the heat of the moment. lol

    Guess we'll see how well our boys do, especially our little stand-in manager, in all things business and pleasure. ;)
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  • From DonalGraeme on November 16, 2014
    Yay, outtakes are back! And yay, the dreaded return of school is held off in favor of Dax having to put on the pants and fluffy smexiness! Thank you so much! Keep up the fine work!

    P.S. To use football rather than baseball terms as euphemisms, ENOUGH FIELD GOALS! LET'S HAVE THE TOUCHDOWN ALREADY!

    P.P.S. I'm the exact same way when on pain meds. I asked my mom to record my ranting after my wisdoms were out for posterity in the same breath after saying her hair looks like a helmet and thanking her for quote 'pushing me through your vagina'
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  • From ANON - MariMeeko on November 14, 2014
    And there arises a thunderous applause, for Daxter has achieved Ace Blow Job Capabilities! Dayum. *fans self* Jak needs to get on it though and make his little redhead scream. Your move, Fake Jock.

    Jak giving a blow job is going to be great though, I'm eagerly waiting for it.

    I got intensely giggly with those references to my sketch page, but oh my gosh, I died laughing at the outtake of Killer judging them hardcore for their unsatisfactory mating rituals. They should have at least had one litter by now! *Weasel indignation*

    ...Also is Razer creeped out by scary Alien movies? I detected maybe a hint of flustered transfer student? That'd be fun to read about on their side of the Dorm wall. Phoenix is probably teasing him something fierce.

    Daxter really is hardcore though. Take-charge little guy. Gotta love him.
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  • From ANON - dc on November 13, 2014
    One of these days, Jak is going to suprise Dax with a slow-torturing BJ that will cause the whole hall to wake up from Daxter's climax-induced screaming. Torn will NOT be pleased.


    The Ferret Boss is forever watchful, judging your every squeal and toe-curling orgasm, Dax. Do not disappoint your resident voyeur...*DOOK, DOOK, DOOK*...*blows out cigarette smoke*
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  • From ANON - Angie on November 13, 2014
    *snort, snort* I loved the chapter! Loved Killer's outtake thoughts. Hehe
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  • From ANON - dc on August 27, 2014
    *squeal* Daxter is going to "explore" himself!!! Time for the embarrassing dildo purchase scene!
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  • From ANON - Leigh on August 14, 2014
    Love it! I started reading this story ages ago and I was so happy to come back and see so many new chapters (obviously I had to power read through the whole thing again to be sure I hadn't missed any details!) I love your characterisation, almost every line is something I can envision them saying which, of course, does wonders and really helps the focus to be placed on the story - as opposed to constantly rethinking when it just doesn't click!

    On a personal note, I'm glad Keira isn't demonised as she often can be in Jak/Daxter fiction. I think she's a fantastic character.

    I had a quick flick through the reviews and I think you made the right choice altering your old out takes. Whilst I haven't read the others, I think the one at the end of the current chapter (24?) is fantastic and in good taste.

    I hope you're motivated to keep it up for as long as you keep enjoying it. I think you've got a real skill for capturing characters personalities!
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  • From ANON - rockenrosy on August 06, 2014
    Okay, it's official. You have kasooker me into reading this story. I don't know how, but ya did. And ya know what? I like this story! :D
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  • From ANON - Xionamine on August 04, 2014
    Ah i love this story, I'm glad is still going strong and you're taking time showing how their relationship is becoming stronger day by day. It's rare to see stories like this. Anyway! Patiently , awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kay on August 03, 2014
    I kinda want this story again... from Razer and Phoenix's point of view. Seriously, it seems like they have an entire story going on in the background this whole time. I would be so down to read it.
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  • From ANON - MariMeeko on August 01, 2014
    "Not boyfriends?" I have one response to Jak's line of denial there, and that can basically be expressed by the Road to Eldorado gif of Miguel and Tulio saying "Both? Both. Both is good." but with the words changed to "Boyfriends. Boyfriends, yes. Boyfriends it is.*nods*"

    And okay. Damas just rocked the entire chapter with that toast. It was brilliant, perfect and so him. I knew he'd catch on before the boys even had a chance of figuring it out for themselves. I'm also glad that everyone seemed very happy about it and old men didn't have borderline rude things to say! Especially since Daxter couldn't help himself when it came to New-Years Jak Kisses. Showering his boys with love and affection and tablets. What a good daddy.

    AND OKAY Running shoes. YES. yes yes yes. Of course I have news for these two, expensive customized running shoes ain't just something you buy someone who's not your boyfriend. I mean DAMMNN. They sound awesome. To the drawing board, maybe.

    Speaking of the drawing board, though, SHOWER SEX. that is all I have to say on the matter. ;)

    Except not because that really was hot. These things just keep getting more intense and I love how Jak has a newfound love of Frotting, lol!

    The return of the Out takes are really good! Also the inclusion of the Sculptor and his Muse! I wish college would actually let you have a cat...Though I guess in some cases if they're therapy animals...

    Anyway, Fantastic chapter, I adored it so much I apparently couldn't put off leaving a little review!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on July 31, 2014
    Ha! I knew they couldn't keep their relationship under-the-radar forever! XD Go Damas! And I knew the sculptor and his muse had to be in here somewhere... And there they are! Yay!

    Also, J&D hotness is always FTW. Thanks for making my night. :3 Until later!
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  • From ANON - MariMeeko on July 02, 2014
    So the Samos and Daxter one-upping of insulting remarks begins! I wonder if Samos is going to continue on this path in the remainder of the vacation. But Jak again proves his worthiness as a friend with his apology and attempted derailing of the teeth conversation. Sweet heart. Damas is awesome as well, I'd love to see them all embroiled in a snowball war!

    I am loving these chapters full of nods to TPL...Am I right in guessing that the puzzle Dax was playing with was inspired by the Power Cells? :D

    AND OH JEEZ, Frotting. I need more of this, yes yes. I will sit here hoping for more on this subject. And I look forward to when they finally have the opportunity to be more...vocal, with each other in bed. ;3
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  • From ANON - donalgraeme on May 19, 2014
    This episode better continue in the next chap! No time skip! We need more hot Jakkie-Daxxie action! But, if you must time skip, then i insist that Jak and Dax kiss in the new year in full view of the family. That is the only acceptable conditions. Keep it up, pretty please!

    P.S. Yes, indeed, Keira's texts were very funny.

    P.P.S. How come ALL of the outtakes have vanished? I reread this and they're just all gone!
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