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Reviews for Crimson Tears

By : GonetGlompsYoai
  • From Insanity on January 16, 2012
    Good start. I look forward to seeing where this goes, and like how the characters have been portrayed so far.

    I'd second the suggestion that a beta would be beneficial: you write well but a bit sloppily.
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  • From ANON - Good Luck on September 12, 2011
    It is funny about how things can change, viewpoints in particular. I never used to care much for stories with M-preg notices in the summary (no matter what the fan-dom was), but now I find myself giving them a peek or two. I think you're doing okay so far. The first chapter went by too fast, but I enoyed your brashly funny version of Leon's character in the second one. Spell-check and editing are good rules to keep in mind. I noticed some grammarical mistakes here and there. It'd do you good to fix them on your own or in conjuction with a trusted friend/beta.

    Any-who, I've been wanting to write a Resident Evil centered fan-fiction of my own, but the pieces have yet to come together. I don't know if you're planning on moving the plot in a concrete direction and/or if you want ideas, but I'd like you to hear me out. I can totally picture a virus infeced Wesker seeking out Chris (and not letting anyone stand in his way) so the two could be together as "mates" or something along those lines. For better or for worse, the previous suggestion has morphed into my personally secret prompt. That virus could have some untested side-effects, you know? And, I could easily see Wesker finding his cure in Chris Redfield. Tangent aside, I hope, above all else, that events in this story won't stray from a consensual setting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2011

    Please correct your disclaimer


    It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you state that no profit is made. It must be clearly stated in that you make no money/profit.


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  • From ANON - Idle Time on August 01, 2011
    Good start, looking forward to seeing more. =)
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