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Reviews for The First's Sister

By : lycanthrope
  • From Jade_Obsession on February 04, 2012
    finally, caught back up, i am!
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  • From shadowblade65 on December 19, 2011
    excellent story i like how you jump between characters gives the illusion your reading two stories but really its only one keep up the good work
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  • From bloodravyn on December 09, 2011
    u couble posted the chapter
    otherwise, i love how quick the warden is to get out of shoe shopping, lmao
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  • From bloodravyn on November 21, 2011
    it's good as always
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  • From Snowfire on November 09, 2011
    Firstly, I really, really like this. It's a lovely idea and you're implementing it masterfully.

    Secondly - and please don't take this the wrong way - would you like a beta?
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  • From bloodravyn on November 09, 2011
    stealing the lamp
    please use spellcheck of some sort?
    otherwise, this is quite the delightful read
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  • From shadowblade65 on November 06, 2011
    liking this very much excellent story keep up the good work
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  • From shadowblade65 on November 02, 2011
    excellecent story please keep going i really wanna see where you take this so deffinetly keep up the good work
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