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By : sillyneko345
  • From ANON - Mrs.Ero-Cook on January 06, 2012
    oh.... my.... God!!! 'twas amazing! 'twas fantastic! 'twas beautiful! I'm speechless! Will you ever stop amazing me?! I can't wait for you to continue with Room and Board now O.O. You and Grimreaperchibi are absolutely amazing! Keep up the good work guys! And a happy New Year! ^^
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  • From TaintedEmerald on January 04, 2012
    Woot! More Dark (well, Dark-esque) Jak! I really should extend my thanks to Grimreaperchibi myself; she seems to be a major source of inspiration for you, which in turn means more for your own fans to enjoy.


    Really like the premise of this one: Daxter as the sacrificial "maiden"/street rat works quite nicely. Have to admit though, that opening scene reminded me of a somewhat darker one in When True Night Falls. Anyways, I like how easily the plot advances from one chapter to the next, Daxter's reactions to the demons (especially Damas) are astoundingly cute, and the action scene with the metal head was well done.


    Also, writing the whole story and then stringing it out? Cruel, but at least it means something to look forward to at the end of each week. Looking forward to the next installment.


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  • From grimreaperchibi on January 01, 2012
    *gladly collects her Widgit push* I will always take the blame for something so damn cute. Gods, I love this kid, and him being Jak's little brother will always be nine different kinds of awesome in my book. And I do, I love this fic so much, I want to do impractical things with it (get your mind out of the gutter).

    I always cringe when I come across the Metalhead claws into thigh part. I get sympathy pains. Holy damn, that sucks. And then having to listen to a body being broken into base components? Passing out was a very kind thing for you to do. Lunch would have been what I lost...from like three weeks ago. *shudders* But, as always, protective!Jak makes up from all the squirmy-ew moments. I really do love the "fix it fix it fix it" mantra, too. Talk about having one very freaked out demon on your hands. Nothing like a good dose of "Holy Shit!" to get people's butts in gear.

    And just to be evil, I support your plan for dragging it out two pages at a time. Great way to keep the tension high. *snicker* The only question is, is there enough to drag it out for ten more weeks? Oh no, there isn't? Oh darn, you need to add more to it... *evil laughter* Yeah, seriously though, ignore me. You've done more than enough already. I could not ask for more. Thank you! *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Franko on January 01, 2012
    Damn Dax, sounds like a bad laceration! Must suck.

    Ooh, Damas is finally being concerned for Dax for once, we now have a soft side! Now exploit it. :3

    Hmm, Jak wants to talk? I hope it ends in sex. Lots of sex.


    Also, every day is now Friday. Don't believe what the Man tells you, the rest of the days of the week aren't true.
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  • From ANON - truthasfarasitgoes on December 31, 2011
    Ahh, the sacrifices-self-for-member-of-adopted-clan trope. Excellent! I was guessing the jealous-other-challeges-newcomer's-right-to-membership with the jealous other possibly being named Erol. (Your choice is sooo much better!) Also, "to be concluded?" It's ending so soon? I can feel the withdrawal pains already, arrrgh!

    Finally...
    Whines piteously at having distressed the Author, from whom all blessings flow. Biting self in agonized contrition, slinks, belly scales scraping the ground, over to where the Author was last seen. At a great expense of personal energy, materializes a pound of the Author's favorite recreational chemical in hopes that the sacrifice will coax the Author out of hiding and swears a great and terrible oath to never again do anything to frighten the Author!

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  • From ANON - Mrs.Ero-Cook on December 30, 2011
    Well, I'm sure glad that Santa!Jak did drop by your house after all xDD and don't worry, we have all wanted to spontaneously sing silly songs at some point of our lives lol But back to the chapter, poor little Daxxie! D: Dramatic chapter this was! XD And NO! You will not leave us hanging~~~ You will give us that smut scene completely~~~ lol
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 30, 2011
    Don't. You. DARE break up the smut like that. ;___; That's the worst idea I've ever heard of, and you're a sick little writer for even thinking of it.

    Kidding~ *glomp* I love ya, love your J&D, and long story short I've enjoyed this past year of ficcage. ^w^ Looking forward to next year! =D
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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on December 30, 2011
    *reading chapter* Hee hee, Mar... Oh, no!... yay, Damas!... Awww, cuddles...

    *reads second author's note* ..... *falls dramatically to knees* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo......
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  • From ANON - truthasfasasitgoes on December 29, 2011
    See, now, this is why I love your stuff. Here we are at chap. 3 and you've eliminated all potential sources of conflict. Big badass daddy deamon (who really isn't all that badass seemingly) has given in, the kiddiwinkies love teh hooman and the deamons in general are nicer people than people. I can think of 1/2 doz. tropes off the top of my head, plus variations, that you could use to move the plot along, or you could do something totally new. I cannot begin to guess what you will do. I cannot wait to find out.

    ...trots off to corner of the room, throws self down on floor with a huge sigh, begins nibbling at one claw on a back foot while throwing tail over nose and muzzle leaving only eyes showing, staring at the author, unblinkingly, trying to will the next chapter to appear...

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  • From CrabRangoonMonster on December 28, 2011
    EEEEEEEEEEE, Tess. I can totally imagine her doing the cooing thing too, especially as Keira drags her out the door.

    And I assume so, but need this confirmed: "Mar" is essentially " The Kid", right?
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  • From Amaronith on December 24, 2011
    Everybody now: D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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  • From ANON - Franko on December 24, 2011
    Poor Daxxie, he's gone far too long without a proper meal or bath. Then an almost heart attack to great him in the morning, with a side order of tall and threatening!


    Oh, hott kissing action, and Jak stopped it? Somethings up, and I can't wait to find out now. Curses, I can't wait a week! I proclaim every day to be Friday.




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  • From grimreaperchibi on December 24, 2011
    Yay for Widgit cuteness!!! Damn, I love that boy. Hyperactive, precocious, and completely oblivious to personal boundaries. The perfect younger brother. We could rule the world with that boy under our--Wait. Someone tried that already. Never mind then; moving on!

    This chapter gives me all sorts of warm fuzzies, from the why Tess is cooing over Daxter, to them curled up in the morning, patiently amused brothers and protective gestures. And wing-boners!!! *falls over giggling* So damn cute. Jak is so far in over his head, and he has no idea. And this is just the beginning. Complete awesomeness.

    Have I mentioned recently that I love this fic? 'Cuz I do... Little fuzzy hearts all over the place.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 23, 2011
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww~!! Jak has a little brother! So cute. *huggles* XD And Damas has certainly calmed down. If Jak is sure Daxter will be staying, then there's nothing to worry about. ^w^ And Tess and Keira sound as awesome as ever. Tess' cooing sounded adorable. X3

    lmao Something tells me Samos and Dax will get along as well as they ever did. X3 *gigglesnort* I can NOT wait to see that. XD And, of course, the warm-and-fuzziness. ^//w//^

    See you later!
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  • From ANON - Mrs.Ero-Cook on December 23, 2011
    *squeeeeeeeee* Hooray!!! That was so, so, so, so *an hour later* CUTE!!! And cute little Mar was like the cherry on top! Yay! Totally loved it, you seriously never disappoint! Lol Oh, and a Merry Christmas to you too! Hope Santa-Jak drops by your house! XDD lol
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