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Reviews for Monster Girl Saga

By : GenocideHeart
  • From Guardian_Raize on May 04, 2013
    Just finished my 3rd read through, looking forward to more. Hope to see a new chapter soon? you used to update once a month...what happened?
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  • From ANON - JD on April 02, 2013
    Please don't let this end up on a shell and end up not being finished! I love this version of the story and I want to see more of it done!
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  • From ANON - Twig on March 14, 2013
    And now I shall motivate you, through the power of memes!

    Mah Boi, this story is what all true bibliophiles strive for! You must compose additional chapters. Pingas!

    That is all.
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  • From ANON - Vincent on March 06, 2013
    I do hope that this story won't be abandoned like many other good works of fanfiction out there. This is quite literally the only fanfiction that MGQ has and it'd be a horrid waste for it to just be chucked aside. Especially when this looks like it'd end up better than the original game, not that the story in the original game was all that bad in the first place.


    Hope to see this updated soon!
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  • From ANON - DroppedMuffin on January 11, 2013
    You know, I am still waiting for another dream from Ilias and for that slime to pop up.
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  • From ANON - DroppedMuffin on January 10, 2013
    I understand that that was necessary. Don't do it again, Luka started acting strange the moment he saw a harpy and it never went back to normal.

    Also, the humans reactions were way too calm and logical. Really, two women cared.
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  • From ANON - DroppedMuffin on January 10, 2013
    Aside from the bit with bats, Vampys scene was completely adorable.

    *nibble*
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  • From ANON - DroppedMuffin on January 10, 2013
    You did something that I must commend, you had the innkeeper look out the window to tell the time. It is amazing how many people put watches in stories where they cannot exist yet, or can only be owned by the insanely rich. And the ones that don't mention using the sun to tell time simply use "I'd better get going, the (laundry/food)'s done"
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  • From ANON - DroppedMuffin on January 10, 2013
    Ha, here is the one thing that would fuck them over so many times from now on, thin walls.

    I don't think this will be the last inn scene, and most of them have rooms pretty close back in the 1300s-1400s
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  • From GreenAlien on January 08, 2013
    Great Story!
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  • From ANON - Honest on December 12, 2012
    Quite impressed by this piece: I've heard about MGQ and while I have never played it, I feel that I really ought not now. Judging by everyone else, Luka here is quite a bit better than the original concept. Can't express enough the pleasure I have in seeing an actual story fleshed out here, it is quite a rarity to find one that is more than enthralling.
    Your form and conventions in writing are top notch, especially considering the length of what you have here; nary a mistake to be observed, and nothing says good story like having to be reminded that there was even one typo in a whole chapter... My only less than glowing response to this (indeed) saga is that Luka has a bit of Mary Sue in him. Despite all the depth you have been very adept at filling him and even minor characters with! But I strongly suspect that any blithely Sue-ness is really the Fairy Tale part of this, and MGQ itself being the inspiration. I am truly impressed with the breadth and scale of your writing, thank you for making this.
    Please do keep at it, as you most certainly have me hooked and it seems like you sincerely enjoy writing this.
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  • From ANON - Savaris on December 09, 2012
    I've read chapter ten about three times now! I'm really pumped for the next chapter already! Specifically, Luka and Tamamo's interaction! Although I know it's going to be quite awhile till next chapter, it's fine since I know it's going to be worth the wait! I'm still kind of hoping you'd grace us with another update before MGQ 3 get's released though, haha!

    P.S: Thanks for replying to my queries in Rouge's site. This is Sav-kun logging out!
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  • From ANON - Ben Kennedy on December 08, 2012
    All I can say is: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE NEW CHAPTER, GH!! XD Also, please send my thanks to those that helped you too! :D

    After reading it(plus reacting to all the right places, like laughing my butt off during some parts), it made me want to read the whole fiction once again! ON MY MOBILE PHONE, NO LESS!! XD (Writing this post on it too. Maybe a bit too long for my taste.) And to my surprise yet again, it felt like I was reading it for the first time! :D I won't be more surprised if this happens every time I do it! I find it even more funny, and at sad situations make me feel all the same. You did an excellent at making this fanfic!

    While re-reading, I found out that you did have a typo! (FINALLY! A rarity of the situation! XD) Though, not from your new chapter. It was the mistake I mentioned a while back. It was where Luka explained to Alice that "Tyris(?)" gave him the stolen red gem; you typed 'game' instead of 'gave'. In chapter 5 or 6, if I am not mistaken. (Sorry if I misspelled Dragon Girl's name. It would take some time to check it again, and I am too tired for that.)

    Also, when I mentioned "the other fanfic site", I meant fanfiction(.)net. I mean, you had other stories there, so why continue there(as well as your other stories)? Sorry to pry, but I am not aware of any sort of situations in such sites, like deletion of M-rated fiction by moderators and such. I am only a passing-by reader, but whenever I find an excellent fanfic, I would comment on it; eventhough only through guest posts. Yours here is one of the exceptions. XP

    Also, I'm answering your email to me here as I didn't have the convinience at the time and totally forgot about it until today! XD Would it be okay to reply to you there? I don't usually get replies from my comments and it feels awkward for me. Hehe...

    Anyway, all the best for the next chapter. Can't wait!! XD
    Cheers.
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  • From The13thStranger on December 04, 2012
    Oh my.

    Well... there's only one thing left to do.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4nyHPIcbn88&list=UUb0R-W7KDn4ZrY3uGrP4Acg&index=8&feature=plcp

    TOUCH. FLUFFY. TAIL.
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  • From ANON - N on December 01, 2012
    Excellent chapter!. Took me awhile to read but well worth the time. Hope you update this soon and keep up the great work.
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