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Reviews for Monster Girl Saga

By : GenocideHeart
  • From ANON - N on August 04, 2012
    Luka will get an ear full when he returns lol. Awesome chapter made me like the queen even more. I expect the men will be worshiping luka now lol.
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  • From ANON - Don on July 18, 2012
    I love this story! it is a great read. the story is funny and the sex is ok (Maybe a little over doen but then again it IS baised on a H-Game.)
    btw you have probably been asked this a milion times alrady but...DO you know how to get a hold of a copy of this game? I have been looking but have had no success...i would love to know. Thanks for a great story
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  • From Ryvius on July 16, 2012
    I've been reading this story for awhile now, and I gotta say it's great.

    I haven't played the game this is based on, so I'm somewhat in the dark in places, but I like the characters, like the story, and the lemons are great(my favorite so far have been with the Elf twins & the Harpy Queen).

    This latest chapter was one of the best in my opinion. I really liked the whole situation with the Harpy's taking the men for breeding. If at all possible, I'd really like to see a spin-off story about one of the men who got captured before Luka showed up, started a 2nd family with one of the them, then tell what happened after Luka resolved the situation, if you ever have the time and feel like doing that.

    In any event, this is a great fic, and I'm certainly excited to see more.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Savaris on July 13, 2012
    Man, read it from a start to end in one sitting! Great new characters! Lengthy chapters! Most of all, Cool! Competent! Luka! Whew. Had to get that out of my system. I'd love to read more of this, especially looking forward to Tamamo and her fluffy tails and fried tofu, or the duels with Granberia and also how Luka's going to deal with Erubetie... There's quite a lot I'm looking forward to so I'll just stop up to here. I reckon' this be THE best Monster Girl Quest fic out right now and hope we get to read the next chapter soon.
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  • From HardScience on July 12, 2012
    Haha. That's something else isn't it? Poor Luka. I can't help but feel that there'll be some legend of dozens of different monsters who look vaguely similar to each other cropping up in a few years. I wonder if genuine hero monster offspring have a higher chance of being born as a male with monster powers? Either way these kids are going to make the epilogue a whole lot more interesting.

    Thanks for the massive chapter too!
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  • From ANON - DrFortune888 on July 08, 2012
    This is probably the best Monster Girl fic out there right now, I'm happy to see the amount of media on the subject increasing :}
    Luka is so out of character it's funny.
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  • From HardScience on June 17, 2012
    Looks like Alice is as demanding as ever. Still, I can't help but feel that you spend a little to much prose dealing with the Bandits. Sure they're important, but not THAT important.
    I noticed you have given Luka the idea to retrace his steps. I must say that such things almost never happen in fiction, and is in itself a fairly interesting idea.
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  • From The13thStranger on June 16, 2012
    Personally I'm just glad you picked up the pen again. When I saw the author of this thing, I was like 'oh my god are the planets aligned?'

    Maybe they are and I missed my chance to revive my dark god. Whatever this is still good.

    Also seeing an AU written by an author I liked was the last straw for me. So I played the game. Thanks for that.

    To be honest, I was wondering if Alice was going to use tentacle fingers at first since Luka wasn't whining about his goddess watching him fap. But then I suppose she's a high class lady who wouldn't give up the chance for extreme sexual tension by just giving up the goods right away.

    ...so I've got this image in my head of Alice and the heavenly knights fighting over Luka. Or at least Gran and Tamamo. Alma would be in it for the lulz and because of potential hawt dickings. Erubetie probably wouldn't want some Luka steak unless he created a golden age for slimes.

    Anywho, I know I'm rambling here, so I'll break off by telling you that you're doing an awesome job, and by suggesting you try the NG+ sometime. I'll say it changes more then just Luka's ability.

    Peace out mang.
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  • From darklink on May 22, 2012
    very nice story. i hope will continue to write it.
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  • From HardScience on May 22, 2012
    Awesome as usual. The Granberria fight was different enough to be entertaining in it's own right, and Luka's first real monster fight went about as well as expected.
    Feel kinda annoyed though. They took down the Monster Girl Quest page on TvTropes...
    D:
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  • From ANON - Jacobslobsmith on May 02, 2012
    I really like this reboot of the monster girl story your doing genocide.
    Chapter 5 literally had me rolling on the floor with the new Luka actually having a spine and doing things the normal luka wouldn't dare do.
    can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - N on May 02, 2012
    the moment when alice learns of luka's feelings towards illias. priceless :D Keep up the excellent work you are doing with this story!
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  • From HardScience on May 01, 2012
    Great as always, and huge too! I'm really struggling to find anything to critique in your stories. Keep up that fantastic quality!
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  • From ANON - Anon. on May 01, 2012
    Let's see, Granberia is a give away fight who can be impressed with a minor amount of skill - or at least a monster sword skill, and Tamamo only fights with those that provoke her first. So the first fight against the Heavenly Knights would more or less logically be like it was in the game, against Alma Elma. That's gonna be a tough one to justify, sexually I mean. She has this weird balance between being prideful and having to earn her respect, so... not fighting in the first place or losing a fight are both basically no goes unless you do some creative writing, and you can't push her to far or she'll get serious as the Succubus Queen. This is just me assuming you'll have at least one sex scene for every Heavenly Knight, at least that's what I hope you'll do, they are far too awesome of characters to not do at least that much, and you've set up some ground work for Erubetie already - which was awesome, by the way.

    I'm also interested in seeing what you're going to do with the Four Bandits, they also might be a little tricky to pull off seeing as they are... well... childish and would want to keep Luka.

    Keep up the good work and fairly quick updates!
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  • From ANON - Luxuria on April 20, 2012
    I'm really enjoying the story you're telling. It has a lot of depth and a nice flow, the good grammar is really the cherry on top of the cake. I'm looking forward to the rest eagerly. =)
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