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Reviews for Deathclaw Mating Season

By : PrinceofPervs
  • From ANON - Someone on October 21, 2014
    No Third chapter anymore? :c
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  • From Fanfictionfan360 on February 12, 2013
    i hereby demand that chapter 3 gets written, this is too good to end on a cliffhanger ;)
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  • From WotanAnubis on June 17, 2012
    Not a bad story at all, though I would have just merged the first 'chapter' with the second chapter.

    The only problem I have with the story is that there are bits in the second chapter which are from the Deathclaw's perspective, which makes it seem more like a primitive person (for lack of a better word) rather than a wild, instinct-driven animal. I don't know if this was your intention, though.
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  • From EzriCandy on June 09, 2012

    Please correct your disclaimer


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