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Reviews for CSV Virtue

By : Gallendro
  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2014
    I rarely review. But this needs one major edit:

    Reading giant blocks of text is tiring to the human brain. Break up the paragraphs, especially when there are multiple people conversing. Each of your paragraphs should be at least a quarter of the size they currently are.

    Other than that, looks decent. Just really hard to read.
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  • From KhaosKyuubi on November 16, 2012
    Okay, This is acually really good, but it also sucks so bad!!! You need to break up your paragraphs!!! No one likes looking as a giant block of text!!!

    Here's a basic rule of paragraphs, every time the speaker changes... START A NEW PARAGRAPH!!!!! by not doing so, the text becomes dense, blocky and virtually unreadable unless you put your finger to the screen and follow the line of text with your finger. It is just PAINFUL to read, which sucks because this is SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!

    -Khaos
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  • From ANON - macready on October 07, 2012
    Great story so far. Really interested to see more and see what other things can arise in this. Good job.
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