Reviews for Wash Away My SinsBy : horrorgal |
Hey remember me? I am still here.
I hope you are still writing. its been a while since I came here to read. I hope you are well! Just wanted to write you again.
Its Jepi btw. =D
chapter 20-21
I think Alexander needs to attend a course on how to be civil, and how to woo a person. It really doesn't help you cause if you kidnap your crush, and then hurt the crush's boyfriend, or killing the crush's boyfriend's servants and turning them into walking fleshbags. No sir, it doesn't.
I at least hope Alexander didn't go back to John to "undo" what he healed.
I wish Daniel best of luck, poor sod needs it.
Ch 4
I love Daniel's and John's interactions, they're so organic and pleasant, even if they end up a little naughty. Just makes it better.
Ch 3
I enjoy the calmness of this chapter, I wonder if Game-Daniel ever recovered after what happened in Brennenburg when he survived the ordeal?
John is such a nice and pleasant character, it's not often that I like oc's so quickly, but he really has a nice character. He's a little like the glue for Daniel's poor broken mind I'd say, hope he can help keep it together.
Ch 2
Ugh, poor Daniel, I always feel bad for him when he's poorly, he's gone through enough as it is.
At least he's got a "friend" now, he dearly needed that, a friend who isn't a decapitated head. Although his nightmare doesn't seem to be over quite yet, I'm worried for him.
Ch 1
Daniel has the weirdest and worst of luck. He gets totally fucked over, mentally and physically, but then his luck kicks back in and he miraculously survives a shitty ordeal.
Although this time his poor luck really seems to have been his own fault, what fool drinks themselves to the point where they can't even run away anymore? Especially after such an experience as Daniel had in Brenneburg? You gotta keep them running legs ready Danny-boy!
I like how it shows Daniel struggling with his past though, and how he seemingly tries his best to "kick off" who he used to be, even his old work as an archeologist, or maybe he just had his fair share of curses, enough for the rest of his life?
How nice of John to just take in a random stranger though, even if Daniel was hurt, you gotta really have some trust in people to just take in someone without having taken precautions.
oh no poor daniel:( do something someone, make alexander go awayyy
this is such an amazing story! please keep writing.
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