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Reviews for Pokemon Colosseum: heat in the shadows

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From ImMyOwnOC on July 16, 2014
    Another great chapter. Can't wait to see what you do with Suicune
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  • From ANON - Da Anon on April 06, 2014
    God I am loving this so far, the last author I read who wrote this kind of stuff that had more than sex was that Johto Heat story on FF. though that Author was a greenhorn, the characters he came up with had as much personality as the ones you use. Plus the sexual use of attacks outside of Vine Whip, and the humor helped his(?) story stand out amongst other poke-smut before it was pulled, while yours stand out for the great plot. I hope you keep up the great work. I will keep following your stories, so expect to hear from me again.

    before I forget, is it possible to have Ferma show up again, mainly because she is constantly demanding that her new "masters" Rui and Wes to once again "punish" her, and have Rui use one of those special strapons that can cum with enough pressure?.
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on March 20, 2014
    Although serious, another great chapter
    Only keep the slight English speaking for the other two dogs
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on January 21, 2014
    Rui'll be lucky not to end up with a Makuhita egg in her stomach XP
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on January 02, 2014
    This chapter is quite possibly my favorite you have ever written. Just the fact that you had the eveelutions in it was awesome, but the way you used them, it really got to my inner furry. Thank you. Thank you so much. Im sorry this review was so late, but seriously, this one kicked ASS
    Jomahawk
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on December 01, 2013
    OK, the Pokemon turning into Antrho wasn't something I saw coming, but it was interesting. Please continue.
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on November 30, 2013
    When you said you were adding. A lemon with Umbreon and Espeon, I thought you were gonna focus on them
    This was still an interesting surprise though
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on October 13, 2013
    Well, im not gonna say that was my favorite chapter from you (although I am very biased after chapter 10 of lust green.) I will say that this was up to your usual standard of hot lemon action, and im glad someone finally found a good use for rain dance ;)
    Lolking forward to chapter 11 m8!
    JMAHWK
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on October 13, 2013
    I'm with Wes and saying that Rui is a weirdo.

    Though I am still curious on the idea of the Mightyena Shadow Pokemon being a bit more...violent than the other ones, given that he IS a dog and all ^^; But that's just a small idea.
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on October 12, 2013
    That wa an interesting lemon ;)
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on August 23, 2013
    I seriously never understood how stupid the evil organizations in the pokemon games could be, I mean, if they are able to be beaten by a single, or in this case two, kids, they had no business with their evil plots. On the plus side, this chapter was awesome, and the two sluts most definitely deserved what they got. Again, I hate how cocky the bad guys are about being unstoppable until you crush them. But it never satisfied me to just beat them, I wanted to physically abuse them back. You are helping me quell those wants ;)
    JMAHWK
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  • From ANON - Akira on August 18, 2013
    Good dude, keep up the sexy work!
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  • From ANON - JoeV1 on August 17, 2013
    Rui is keeping her promise?

    Good. Very good.
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on August 17, 2013
    you never disappoint with the lemons ;)
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  • From ColonelClueless on July 30, 2013
    I haven't read much of this, but what I have read has been pretty goddamn good
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