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Reviews for A Slave... Or A Pet

By : NakedOwlMan
  • From Alleyway_Ravager on February 28, 2013
    OH MAN! What a fucking cliffhanger to leave it on! I hope your getting more reviews on the kink meme since AFF doesn't seem to huge in the review department. Might I say this is a pretty spectacular fic? Love all the scenes you've put together, the story, the characters, everything. Love a good rape scene in stories and your descriptions...mmm! Good stuff.

    Really want to see where you take this. Happy ending where they escape? Enslaved Ending? Something completely different? I am excited.
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  • From ANON - cno22 on February 27, 2013
    I don't review stories often, but as a writer myself, I know how much it can suck to not get feedback, and there had been so little on this one.

    I love this story. Any criticism I can think of would be nitpicking because I've enjoyed it so much. I will say, that I hope it has a "happy ending", cause as hot as I find slavery and abuse, I need closure for it as well. I look forward to the rest of this. :)
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  • From ANON - @Anon on February 11, 2013
    Actually Liara says azure is "at the lower reaches, near the bottom," not specifically the lower back. So it's up for interpretation of what exactly it is. I always assumed it was slang for vagina but as I said it's vague enough to be something at the lower back or elsewhere.
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  • From AgentGv01 on February 10, 2013
    Personally by this point in the story I don't get why Liara hasn't been assaulted once, yeah at the start I can see her just watching being a type of mental breaking down but honestly it doesn't really look to be effecting her as much as such a thing should in some ways. I think by this time the Shadow Broker would take her himself at least once or at the very least give her the option to take the places of one or both of them. Given Miranda's little breakdown earlier I think that would fit in with the story by this point.

    Also I'm hoping that my feeling that the whole Solvitis is just a whole mind fuck with them as to give them all false hope before it's revealed that he was actually a loyal crew member told to mess with them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2013
    The Azure is an area on the lower back, a cluster of nerves most likely.

    Liara states as such during LoTSB.
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