Reviews for Pokemon Lust Green version

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From Azure_Blade_Ragna on April 07, 2013
    next chap please
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  • From ANON - thatguy on April 06, 2013
    One quick protip for all your stories, because this is a running problem. I want you to read each paragraph out loud, and every time you have to stop and take a breath, put a period there. You suffer badly from run-on sentences, and reading your stories give me the mental impression of one of those girls who can go on and on without a breath is speaking to me. Your ideas are really, really good, but the structure of how it's written kills it for me.
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  • From ANON - Rillis on April 05, 2013
    Loved the opening line about the title. Great Story as usual
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  • From verifiaman on April 05, 2013
    Ohh a gangbang! and oh more healing by nurse joy!
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on April 04, 2013
    Nice job. And I take it Pikachu and Bulbasaur will 'get along' quite well.
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  • From ANON - Gryphon on April 04, 2013
    Man good story keep it up, I like that you put little details in it and I hope you can get the next chapter out as soon as possible. :)
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on April 04, 2013
    Awesome as per usual m8. My only complaint is you acting like gamefreak and teasing us with the misty bit. All im going to say is that the next dvd cover better have misty and leaf on it.
    JMAHWK
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on April 03, 2013
    that was DEFINITELY the most interesting chapter I've read ;)
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  • From verifiaman on April 01, 2013
    Wow that was hot and brutal! every time he loses huh, increasing in brutality....
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  • From ANON - Julia White on March 17, 2013
    AWESOME! Keep it going, that was great! Both chapters had a kinky sex scence, i liked it ;D
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  • From ANON - QWOP on March 11, 2013
    good chapter just wish it wasn't such a wait (im impatient) also cannot wait for when Leaf gets to Misty gym anyway keep it up with the awesome story
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on March 10, 2013
    Interesting chapter...though may I suggest this Pokemon for Leaf: Eevee.

    Since it can evolve into many different types, it helps with ideas, right?
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on March 10, 2013
    M8, you know how much of a fan I am, so please, please take this only as theconstructive criticism it is meant to bee. I really don't like this chapter. I really don't leaf and blue should be together at all. I really don't like the idea of that asshat (which is what I have named my rival since gold) getting any. Just my opinion m8.
    JMAHWK
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  • From Corsair420 on March 10, 2013
    Love this story so far, keep up the amazing work I can't wait to see the next chapter, hope it comes soon
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  • From ANON - Rillis Morta on March 09, 2013
    glad to see that this one has a second chapter. LEaf is one of my favorites to read about
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