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Reviews for A King's Harem

By : TeezyMcGee
  • From SniperJoe on April 27, 2018

    I quite like this. I don't know why this particular premise doesn't see more exploration.

    It seems quite a tidy way to execute a Harem.


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  • From ANON - Guest on August 26, 2016

    I'd love it if you continued this story.


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  • From ANON - Ferrox on May 27, 2013
    Instead of "oh fuck!" how about "oh Goddess!". Instead of "you fuck like a god", "you take me like a god". It's just, the word fuck doesn't suit Zelda or the LoZ Skyward Sword world. "Fuck yes" should be "goddess yes" and "fuck, fuck, fuck" could be replaced with "yes, yes, YES".

    Simple changes, but I think they'd suit the story better.

    That being said, this is quality smut. It's just that it's a bit immersion breaking when the dialogue doesn't suit the setting. Noth the characterizations, those are fine.

    I do hope you keep writing this story.
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  • From ANON - MAS on May 27, 2013
    Please for the love of god continue this story, it has so much potential and I realy like your writing style.
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  • From DonCorneo on May 26, 2013
    Nice work, this was a good read! An exciting premise backed up by a keen sense for dialogue, and you did a good job keeping the sex entertaining throughout. I'd love to see some of the other girls from Skyloft explored this way!
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  • From ANON - C.C. on May 26, 2013
    This chapter was brilliant. Though I'm a bit disturbed by all the "fucks" you put into there. While Zelda as a sex kitten I could see, a pott mouth is not. And it doesn't feel like it fits in the world.

    Also, shouting for "god" does not fit at all. The godess, the three godesses...those perhaps. Yes. But there is no entity by the monikker god there. Calling Link a "god" is fine. But again, the rest doesn't fit the Skyward Sword universe.

    Still, a brilliant story and I do hope for more.
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  • From darkshadowlink on March 19, 2013
    You instantly became one of my favorite authors! Awesome potential, Skyward Sword really freshens up the premise.
    I made an account just to tell you this and encourage to keep doing this story and hopefully more stories.
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  • From AgentGv01 on March 13, 2013
    SO far I like this story yeah the characters might be a bit off but for something like this it's kind of needed and they still come off as being those characters to me so that's good. I have to say that although I'm more used to people using the OFT era since that has lots of females to use this is the first I've seen for Skyward Sword. I can't remember seeing that many women characters I can remember two others that weren't shown in this so I'm not sure how you'll stretch this out. Still I find the concept a bit new being Zelda's idea for the whole thing so it should be fun to see how it goes from here.

    I personally can't wait to read more and I hope you update this story.
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  • From ANON - MAS on March 13, 2013
    Please for the love of god continue this story, it is so good, and I realy, realy want to see more. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Andrew on March 12, 2013
    hot story, good job!
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  • From verifiaman on March 11, 2013
    Do you do requests? my email is verifiaman@yahoo.com
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