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Reviews for Scorpion's Harem

By : devilmank
  • From ANON - Tyler on June 23, 2015
    I love the first chapter it was very good plus the fact sindel got the business lol but seriously it was excellent id be more then happy to help with future chapters also in the secon chapter millena gets her moith restored to normal and she begs to live in the palace
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  • From ANON - Devil's Advocate on July 03, 2013
    This story is getting very interesting. I like it thus far but I'm hoping you update more frequently.

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - UNKNOWN on July 02, 2013
    Good story so far.

    Hope you update it soon.
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  • From ANON - harpoon spear on June 23, 2013
    Good story so far. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kunai with Chain on June 13, 2013
    Awesome story so far. Hope the next chapter involves Mileena. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ishtar on April 25, 2013
    I must admit this was actually very well written. I'm curious as to the direction this will be heading, especially if Scorpion confronts Mileena. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2013
    ==Also if Scorpion's clan is restored then his wife and son would also be alive and so why no mention of them or the fact that he just left them like some kind of deadbeat? That's something I don't get unless you completely forgot that he had a family of his own (one of the main reasons I thought it was odd putting him at the star for this)==

    If you read carfully, his clan (and family) never were brought back to life, only their souls were no longer enslaved, and they could finally rest in peace in heaven.

    Anyways I REALLY liked this. Scorpion is one of my favorites, and I'm glad to see him having a more peaceful role for once compared to all the shit he went through in all of the games story.

    Please continue it, I really would like to see more
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  • From ANON - Deadlock on March 16, 2013
    Nicely done, but I agree with the first reviewer; the ending was bit rushed. But all in all, decent work.
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  • From ANON - scxcr on March 15, 2013
    I like it. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From AgentGv01 on March 14, 2013
    Well it's okay although Scorpion is a very odd choice for this kind of story, mostly it was written well but for some reason you rushed through the ending there as soon as you got to the actual sex part the nice flow you had going went out the window and you just rushed through it all way too quickly. Also if Scorpion's clan is restored then his wife and son would also be alive and so why no mention of them or the fact that he just left them like some kind of deadbeat? That's something I don't get unless you completely forgot that he had a family of his own (one of the main reasons I thought it was odd putting him at the star for this)
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