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Reviews for The Chosen One Unknown

By : Britt_601
  • From ANON - Sonya on August 26, 2015
    Whoo! Another good chapter. :) The siblings are about to have a chat. *runs around in circles in excitement*
    And screw the people trying to tell you what to do with your story! If they don't like it, they can freakin' go read something else! D:
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  • From ANON - Sonya on August 04, 2015
    I'll wait as long as I have to. *continues to patiently wait* :D
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  • From Britt_601 on June 20, 2015
    @Sonya

    Oh absolutely not! It's just going throw a few tweaks and grammar fixes. I am not abandoning this story because I like it way too much to do so! Thank you for the support though, I'll work faster to get the rest of the story out!
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  • From ANON - Sonya on June 18, 2015
    This story hasn't been forgotten, right? D: I wanna know what's gonna happen next. :(
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  • From Britt_601 on January 22, 2015
    @Yui

    Not sure if you're being cynical or not, but I am well aware of that fact. Having cultures mixing is nothing new. There are Black cultures with White ancestors and White cultures with Black ancestors and everything else in between. I understand that this is a bit unorthodox but I'm sticking to the way this story is written. If this is not your cup of tea then maybe you can check out my Victor's Mate story. If not, then thank you for the time that you had to look at this story.
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  • From ANON - Yui on January 22, 2015
    Amazing, you bring up African culture and yet you have a Caucasian woman as you lead. Wow.
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  • From Britt_601 on August 06, 2014
    I just want to say thank you to those who reviewed. It's not easy to try and remain true to the character while adding your own spin in, so I'm glad you guys have enjoyed what you've read so far!
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  • From ANON - LaSonya on July 20, 2014
    >:D!!! Omg! I can't wait to see what happens next!! *bounces around room* And your OC intrigues me. :)
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  • From LadyHavok on June 28, 2014
    More, more, more!!! Your writing style is refreshing. You use correcr grammar, and it is truly a soothing balm. Please continue, as I am beyond excited to see what happens with dear Verg, and your surprisingly deep and thought out OC. Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Vicky on November 14, 2013
    This is quite an interesting story. I like full, wordy ones like these. I see you have an OC in here as well. I don't want to sound bitchy or anything, but I hope she doesn't turn out to be some raging (insert whatever kind of mystical creature that's stronger than the twins) type of thing. I can't tell you how many stories have flat character portrayals. But so far it seems like she has a gritty past. Can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - bleh on August 15, 2013
    Uh, yeah...Can we get an update to this?. I've been looking for a well-written story and I've found it, and the way you've written this up, I'm eager to see how you'll do Vergil
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  • From ANON - anon girl on April 25, 2013
    Moving along I can see that this is a great read so far. You have a quirky sense of writing style that's very detailed and thorough and it's been a delight.

    Dante having his pizza taken away from him just makes me want to give him a big ol' hug. Aw don't worry Dante, perhaps this will give you some restraint! I like how Dante had the deal going on with the blood seal. I gotta be honest it's been done over in quite a few stories, but I have not seen many do it the way you do it, which is a good thing. I like how you built up the scene leading to his brother, going through his emotions of anger and betrayal. Nice going.

    I can see that Maisha (cool, funky name btw) has some issues that are riding on her shoulders. At first I thought she was going to be this average little thing but she's an adult that has to make some adult choices. Btw, I THANK YOU for giving her a differnt background this time instead of being some high-school/college student. Ugh that gets tired and old. I could totally imagine the monster and what it looked like, even more sewwt was how Dante saved her in the nick of time.

    Can't wait for another update!
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  • From ANON - anon girl on April 24, 2013
    This story, while still too early to tell, is turning out to be a great read. It's rare to find a story like this on here so I'm glad you put some thought and effort into it. Your OC seems likeable and realistic; and much different from the rest so that's a big plus. I can't tell you how many girls are 5'5 and brunette on here (eyeroll). I also like how you gave Dante a mature side in this. While he's an asshole of a goofball, he still has his other emotions that he shows from time to time.

    I'm off to read more!
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