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Reviews for Surrender

By : Bishonen
  • From gravis on August 07, 2017

    Good work, could you do a story base on this (With zelda in charge of this controlled harem

    http://hypnohub.net/pool/show/1749


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  • From ANON - Ashy on September 28, 2016

    Surrender. That is something I want to do soo much if Zelda arrived and got Princess to corrupt me or even if she wanted to do it herself. The fact that Zelda was genuinely being nice to Princess by offering her a way that wouldn't mentally break her was a nice touch, shows that not all hypnotists in media have to be evil! (Lookin at you, practically every cartoon that has hypnosis in!)

    Princess trying to fight her urges seemed very realistic and how Zelda responded was tantilising and kinda makes me wanna be in Princess's place. Especially when she gets all her fantasies flooding back along with wanting to be Zelda's pet. That just makes me feel glad for her yet annoyed it cant be me xD

    I'm not used to writing reviews but you did great! :D


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2015
    A+, would schlick again
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2015
    I too heard about this from the podcast, and she was spot-on, this is very good! It's hard to find quality m/c fanfiction, it's almost always just original stories, which is fine, but obviously it's even more fun when it's characters we know. I hope we'll hear about more stories like this from you in the spotlight soon!
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  • From ANON - darksakura12 on July 02, 2015
    classic, xtremely hawt mind control, alice was right this is great, you should do, one where ruto, young or adult, entrances Zelda or malon, young or adult, by, sexy hypnotic swimming
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2015
    found a this story from a link with a pic on another site, all I can say is its awesome, I hope you will do many more stories like this soon
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  • From ANON - Aqublue on September 11, 2014
    This story makes me think? Is the Squeal gonna be Link and Ganon fucking in the sacred realm?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2014
    I don't know how, but please, please, PLEASE, PLEASE, PPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE make a continuation, a sequel, a follow-up, ANYTHING to this! when I saw the picture I thought that was hot, but the story blows that away!
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  • From ANON - Bad Bunny Mommy on February 20, 2014
    I really don't know how to feel about this one. It's very dark, and abusing Zelda when she's a little girl, even if she's actually got an adult mind (at least in a sense) troubles me. But I have to admit...there is a certain deep, dark thrill to this story. It's intensely sexual, and even though I feel guilty about it, there's a lot of me that loves this...this corruption of Zelda and her world, and the entirety of what she becomes and how she gets there. I hate to say it, but I would definitely read more of this if you wrote it, and I'd look forward to doing so more than I'd feel uncomfortable about it. Still, I'm glad most of your stories are much nicer affairs, like the ones with Ruto, Gardevoir, Malon, and Rapidash. But I liked your Blaziken story a great deal, and I can't deny that I feel much the same way about this one.
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  • From ANON - Surrender on November 10, 2013
    holy shit, thats all i can say...
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2013
    hot DAMN thats a piece of work right there, great stuff!!
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  • From ANON - Easy Breezy Beautiful Cover Girl on May 15, 2013
    There are no words for how arousing this is.....all i can say is wow!!
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  • From ANON - The Todd on May 14, 2013
    Best Loli Mind Control Story Ever Five!
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