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Reviews for Girl's Night!

By : Thatdarnyurilady
  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2013
    Either idea is great, as long as it doesn't have futa in it!
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  • From ANON - Muramasa616 on June 22, 2013
    Excellent story, well written and thought out with an added advantage of being an underused game. I would say a hint of BDSM would be appreciated but since thats your intention anyway, I'll just say the more the better! I didn't notice any mistakes with your writing but feel free to email if you want something checking. Finally I recommend Lucca's idea, it seems a more natural progression than Marle taking the lead just yet and futa is fine by me. EDIT: I didn't realise my email was hidden, it's muramas@live.co.uk
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  • From ANON - Muramasa616 on June 22, 2013
    Excellent story, well written and thought out with an added advantage of being an underused game. I would say a hint of BDSM would be appreciated but since thats your intention anyway, I'll just say the more the better! I didn't notice any mistakes with your writing but feel free to email if you want something checking. Finally I recommend Lucca's idea, it seems a more natural progression than Marle taking the lead just yet.
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  • From ANON - AFF's Behind the Scenes Yuri Mistress on June 19, 2013
    I would like to help you with editing, but I don't see an email address or anything like that in your profile.

    I like where this is heading, and vote for One Night in Guardia. Since you ask for our thoughts, I hope there is as little futa as possible (none would be best), but it is your story.
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