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Reviews for Playing With Fire

By : Anesor
  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2014
    Chapter 3

    I think falling into darkness is one of those things that I fear more than is rational, so this was nicely shivery for me to read. The fact that Keryn felt empty certainly didn't help those shivers. The ending made sure I'd shiver even more.

    Lovely use of some very challenging words! :D
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  • From pip on April 22, 2014
    2. Great use of the prompts, but I really doubt that Togge would get far on his own. Too easily distracted, though really, who could be immune to one of those things?

    3. The crumbling stairs were a really nice touch, and a moment of very real fear and dread. The best authors use those simple fears - fantastic!


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2014
    Chapter 2

    Oh, this was absolutely lovely! Charlene is a delight, and I did take a sneaky delight in Togge getting a bit in over his head, or one of them, anyway. And to get all the prompts in while doing a flash fic? Marvelous! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2014
    Chapter 1
    I'm not as far along as you are in Neverwinter, but oh, I can't wait to reach this part. Please tell me I'll meet one of Charlene's kin... :D

    Nicely done, with some tricky prompt words!
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  • From pip on April 11, 2014
    I don't know the fandom or game, but I didn't need to for this. Wonderful writing, and great use of the prompts! The succubus seemed like a sad, pathetic kind of thing at the end, but still quite crafty.
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