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Reviews for In good times and in bad

By : kruemel
  • From ANON - johhny on July 22, 2015
    I think i see where your going with this story and im gonna note that the archdemons soul only goes into a baby if it was conceived right before it was killed iv looked up the morrigan info for inquisition and she can have a son without the archdemmons soul if you had sex with her but didnt do the ritual so that woudnt work unless your planning another isabela situation
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  • From ANON - Brad on July 13, 2015
    Sad the stories nearing it's end happy to have found it in the first place keep the chapters coming and don't die I couldn't bare an incomplete story
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  • From isisriku90 on July 05, 2015
    Oh. My. God.
    I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!
    I have been so far behind with school. I just so happen to have thought "hhmm, wonder how much has been added?" Then, poof, almost 20 chapters more!
    You are so amazing! I think you are really Alistair and are just lying to all of us. I cannot even count how many times I have just started laughing hysterically, and my husband asks me what is so funny. This story is just so amazing, and sweet, and funny.
    Gingersnaps will forever be the best werewolf dver. I loved what you did with that part of the story. When it got to the final conversation with the tree, I was so happy that he made it possible for them to have children some day. Then Rori started to be excessively tired. Then the on and off seasickness and nausea. And finally the bigger, heavier boobs. I have been internally screaming "she's pregnant!" for the last like 10 chapters lol. I think it will help them become king and queen, but it will make fighting hard for them. But it has me curious, will her being pregnant change the dark ritual to save the Grey Warden from dieing?
    I love this story so much. I am looking forward to the next one! Great job!
    P.S.
    Great job to the amazing artist people constantly bringing us amazing story fanart! So beautiful. And some naughty lol.
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  • From ANON - Elviae on July 04, 2015
    Urgh. I suspected with the way Alistair was acting in the past couple of chapters, but now I know for sure you've been reading Fifty Shades of Grey. Sorry, this was fun when it was entirely an original work but I have to admit to losing a bit of respect for your creativity and hard work when I read the line, "good point, well made". Please please don't emulate others in your writing, especially if you think it's what other people want. I really was enjoying your work up to this point and it's made me sad to realise that this, like a lot of other fan faction work has been compromised by what amounts as a ridiculous fad.

    Stay true to yourself and your writing style.
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  • From Smiling_Fox on June 20, 2015
    This is one of the best DA fanfic I ever read! I absolutely love your writing style, especially your characterization of Alistair. Rori is a very interesting protagonist and I love the awkward and humorous situations that regularly pop up. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2015
    I think the Great Oak's timing could have been better. If Rori really is pregnant, that's going to put a wrinkle in the fight with the Arch-Demon.O_o
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  • From ANON - Myron on June 13, 2015
    Did you just write what I think you wrote? Either I'm very mistaken, or I just saw some heavy (or rather, soon to be heavy, If You Know What I Mean) foreshadowing.

    Obligatory "loved it" here. Sounds rude but it isn't meant like that. You're story is something I look forward too, I'm always excited to see a new chapter up. This was no different, especially since I really liked the Landsmeet in the game, so I'm anxious to see how you portray it.

    Sincerely, a fan from the start. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2015
    Woo-hoo, human Rori is back, and some more naked fun. I'm quite liking how Alistair is written, and Rori's not-so-serious attitude as well.(the HN in my --unpublished--stories is with Alistair as well, but outside of party relations, she's very serious and even a bit of an Angry Young Woman). Keep writing, this is one of the only stories I check every day just to see if there's more.^_^
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  • From ANON - Erusel on May 13, 2015
    OH MY GOD
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  • From ANON - Brad on April 25, 2015
    Just keeps getting better and better I'm absolutely enamored with this story I've finished my replay through of dragon age origins makes me wish you had been a writer for the games story can't wait for the next chapter werewolf rori=amazeing. Yours a loyal reader
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2015
    Well, perhaps I should have said if you turn her into a werewolf PERMANENTLY. You shall not be flogged at this time.^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2015
    While I'm relatively certain you're not going to turn Rori into a werewolf(if you do, I shall flog you with a loaf of French bread), the 'nearness' of it just makes me wish it could have happened in the game.
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  • From Notevensorry on April 19, 2015
    When I finished DA:O for the thousandth time, I missed Alistair like crazy. I had a wild affair with Cullen, but he was just a rebound guy, and in the end I knew I was not over Alistair at all.
    And then i stumbled upon Pooka's fic, and I got much better :)
    Thank you for providing my kinda-twice-a-week Alistair fix, he's perfect and exactly as I pictured him and just as ̶c̶u̶t̶e manly as hell !:D
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2015
    O-ho! Nice wrinkle, bitten Rori. I don't review as much as I should, but I read everything. Very well done story so far.^_^
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  • From ANON - Boardtwotiers on April 09, 2015
    Wow. You're doing a really great job expanding the world of dragon age. I think you've fairly nailed all of the characters, especially Alistair. My favorite thing about your story is the humor, every time Alistair thinks "DOOM!" or Wynne says "Language!" or Barkley the mabari does anything cute or someone says "licking a lamppost" I grin uncontrollably. Zevran deepthroating the control rod was a stroke of comic genius. Truly exceptional fanfic, 9/10. My only complaint is grammatical sloppiness, otherwise i would be giving you 10/10. I hope you'll keep writing when this story is done.
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