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Reviews for In good times and in bad

By : kruemel
  • From ANON - Myron on March 31, 2015
    I will Pooka, if it ever reaches any stage beyond what's whirling in my head. It would definitely have a thank you for in in it!

    I had this thought for a while, but when I think about Rori I hear "Rebel rebel" by David Bowie. The lyrics really remind me of her.

    And of course, an excellent chapter, the post-threesome guilt is something I honestly couldn't have come up with myself. A pretty interesting take on the development of their relationship. And the fanart rocks!

    Best wishes, and to more great chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2015
    Done very well(the threesome). Weed was a perfect contrivance to "broaden their horizons", LOL.
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  • From ANON - Myron on March 25, 2015
    Holy fuckballs that was an amazing chapter! I see you are ramping up the chapters, even if only for a moment. The description was amazing, and incredibly organic. I would almost dare say that the game's rather dry approach at times forces you to be creative. At least it works out!

    You use of Alistair's perspective and organic incorporation of the lore are inspiring me to try for myself. It's in my head, and certainly not a carbon copy, but your work get my creativity flowing!

    The fact I keep coming back everyday to check for updates shows me how much I love this story. It's like crack!
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  • From ANON - Brad on March 19, 2015
    I love this story as much as I do the game find myself playing along as if it were a script I wish the game had moments in the story like taking the road close to highever as I reached the end of whats been written so far almost couldn't bare to look at the last edited date I'm so glad to see it was updated mere days ago please do continue this piece cause I certainly can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Erusel on February 17, 2015
    Poor Alistair! xD
    It really hurt him to be compared to an earthworm hahaha I loved this chapter!
    And yeah, you can share the link!!
    Im gonna draw more stuff from your story btw
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  • From ANON - Erusel on February 09, 2015
    Loved this last chapters!!!
    I really like the awkward touch you add, sex is really not like movies or books pictured it, sometimes is awkward, funny and you can laugh at anything that happens and thats what I like of your way to write those scenes, you make them feel real.
    Your Alistair IS Alistair in all the 55 chapters I haven't seen him out o character.
    Keep writing!

    About the drawings, I just made an account in tumblr.
    Here's the direct link from the sketchdump.

    http://onehundred-fandoms.tumblr.com/post/110527524711/sketch-dump-ive-been-reading-such-a-wonderful

    I dont know if Rori looks like I painted her, but I would really love to see a reference so I can draw her in all her awesomeness
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  • From AmethystHaze on February 05, 2015
    Thanks for writing this and keeping up with it. While I haven't fully played DAO to finish (I'm terrible and spoiled from DA2 and DAI), I am finding this story much more entertaining. Your depiction of Alistair is really on the mark. I do hope you keep writing. But either way, good stuff!
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  • From ANON - Erusel on February 04, 2015
    I've read your story in 3 days and I have to say that I LOVE IT!!
    Is so perfectly written and I have laughed so many times.
    You write in such a way that I can feel and see the characters in my mind, your story has even inspired me to draw a few scenes.
    Please keep writing!!

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  • From ANON - Myron on February 01, 2015
    I just wanted to stop by and say I'm just about addicted to this story. As a sucker for romance, I almost squeal with delight when a new chapter is up. I admire the research you did into the lore to make it all feel genuine, like using the Thedas calendar and things like that. To me it shows you care as much (undoubtedly more) about the story as the reader does. The banter with the party also fits nicely with the established characters. And of course I love the chemistry between Alistair and Rori, how they are young lovers trying to find what they like (which seems to be rather kinky). I think part of me likes the story so much because this is the same route my characters go when romancing Alistair, which makes it all the sweeter that you expand upon just mere dialogue with nicely written action (i.e. the chapter with their first kiss, or their first night).

    Aside from some minor typos, this story is just amazing! Now this may be writers faux pas to ask about what might be upcoming, but might we see, considering you hardened Alistair, and because of their kinky ways, some multi lady action with a prolific Pirate residing in a brothel of ill repute? Just askin'!

    Anyway, great story, I hope to keep seeing more of it in the future. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Andrea on January 16, 2015
    You are crafting an amazing tale - I especially love the humor you have injected into every chapter, and the way Rori comes alive in every sentence. I can tell you have put a lot of thought and care into your story, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapters to be unveiled. Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Mary on January 13, 2015
    Alistair acting all kingly would make any hot blooded woman swoon. :)
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  • From ANON - Mary on January 12, 2015
    I really like your Alistair. But then again, what's not to like? ;)
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  • From isisriku90 on December 24, 2014
    Haha! Rori knows how to get what she wants, and not just with Alistair! Too funny. Alistair must find his armor quite uncomfortable these days lol. I wonder if Jowan would survive the joining? He would probably cheer Avernus up though lol. Poor Alistair is all mixed up about their new kinky fetishes. As long as Rori doesn't give the poor guy an aneurysm, it's ok, right?
    Anyway, great chapter! I'm not a fan of DA2 either, especially the fact that all of your endings have some level of moral ambiguity. I like good, happy endings if I choose to do them. I actually haven't played it, so I looked up what I needed to try to fill out the Dragon Keep online for Inquisition. Definitely so that when you play it! The default world is ok, but they made Alistair king married to Anora and the female warden died. No mention of a romance, but I love Alistair and refuse to see him marry Anora. She's a not nice word. But the Keep makes Inquisition more real for you and how you played. It goes through every major choice and the fates of everyone in your group. I am replaying Origins at the same time as Inquisition though. My husband and I trade off which game we are playing lol. Looking forward to next chapter!
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  • From isisriku90 on December 23, 2014
    I'm glad you enjoyed my review. I try to let the author know how much their story is appreciated and enjoyed. It always makes me sad to see stories with thousands of hits, but either no reviews or very few. Reviews are the only reward authors get for fanfiction. If someone truly enjoys a fanfiction and wants the long ones continued, the least they could do is leave a nice word. Or even some constructive criticism if they need it. That's all. How hard is it to simply say "love it!"? Some people live completely by texting anymore, so a simple, happy note should be no hindrance. Small rant over, lol. Alistair is definitely still my favorite, but I have come to love quite a few characters. I actually haven't found any that I despise, but I have never picked to have Loghain join my group. Fanfictions for things like these games are even more amazing because it is all based on how the author progresses the hero, gives them history, and fills in the missing places. I love the humor, and I really do believe Alistair would be an amazing king. I wish I could give him the cheese shield from Inquisition lol. Looking forward to more! Great job on the new chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2014
    This really is a very good story. One thing I request is for Alistair to learn about GIVING oral sex. I think you could make that interesting.;)
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